Reviews for Enemies With Benefits |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fab smut and enough plot for an enjoyable romp! Also hilarious ANs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() Nice story. The smut was well done, with just enough plot to hold it together. And somehow I like it that Draco is still a prejudiced brat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great Dramione. nice relationship development with plenty of lemons |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thoroughly savored your storytelling skills woven with the grown up Malfoy and recently heartbroken Hermione. The choice in diction was excellent. Not overdone and sprinkled in at opportune moments. I also enjoyed your portrayal of the characters and their inner angst. While Hermione was open and warming, she was receptive of Draco in his more mature incarnation. I wish I got to hang out with these characters! I also loved the pureblood society details woven into the storyline. Especially Cissa's intervention moments as well as her trying to understand her son. Thank you for a wonderful story and I do hope you'll write more |
![]() ![]() I like the plot better than the smut. I really just skim it. It's good. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story! Thank you so much for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |
![]() ![]() Slfkejoandjwidiajdiwn I'm so sorry for being so selfish in not reviewing till now, but take it as a compliment that I was so engrossed in your story that I couldnt wait to see what happened next! I loved the reveal and yes yes yes let's see what narcissa has to say about this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When he said 'I love it' I pictured a McDonald commercial and PARAPAPAPA IM LOVING IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do enjoy them taunting each other, in public or while immobilised so one might stripp while the other is bound or change ther office ware[do people need pantys?] orally satisfying someone while on a desk?in a conversation with an ex/boss? |
![]() ![]() I know you finished this about a year ago, but wowowow. I am so pleasantly surprised to have stumbled on this work! I don't usually go directly for smut, but I really like how your characterized Draco in this. I thought that was super well done, and a nice change from how he's often portrayed. Sometimes he can be like too mean, too violent, and I like how you wrote him a little more damaged but calm, internalizing a lot of his feelings and struggling to voice them aloud. Excellent work! 3 |
![]() ![]() Hii! So I started reading this in ao3 and really loved and needed to know what happens so I came here and I've read all your fics. it's amazing how much you evolved as a writer and how your writting improved! Wow! I love your fics! Your smut writting is so much better and everything flows just right! Love you! Please keep writting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for this story. Thanks for not making Hermione hysterical and overly needy. Thanks for not making them have 85 babies at the end! Loved it |