Reviews for Edge of the Night |
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![]() ![]() I would've enjoyed this a lot more if you had proofread before you published. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is way to short but it has a lot of love in it ,you should continue this into a full length story! You are a great writer, ands Thank You! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very good beginning,loving it so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope that you write more chapter's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story. So short an epilogue would’ve been great to wrap it up. Did she go back to school start her own publishing company? Did they eventually get married have more kids? What about the fill in with the others. Stuff like that. |
![]() ![]() So sad and I can relate... |
![]() ![]() So sad for the both ! |
![]() ![]() So very sad, but there is Elliot to the rescue... |
![]() ![]() I hope Ana's on the pill but I don't think so ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful job and and and thank you for such a nice ending ! |
![]() ![]() Please bring your stories back to fanfiction, I’m 74 years old and I don’t know how to get to where your stories are now ,so please bring them back to us fans that can’t do all the web stuff! |
![]() ![]() Your story is one of the best ... |
![]() ![]() "I know I have not earned the right to be apart of their happiness" It's A PART (two words). APART means "not together; separated." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I remember reading it some time ago and glad I came across it again |
![]() ![]() I hope you find a proofreader if you ever self-publish. The errors in this story are jarring at times. |