Powerful chapter you have me on the edge of my seat anxious to read the next chapter.

Hope she didn't marry anyone.

Christian Grey is a father and has a son is he going to be SURPRISED.

WOW very interesting Christian takes Ana right on the bar? Condom?

This is a great story please write more. Please love

That was lovely. Will you continue with this story? It would be interesting to see how Christian, Ana, and Leo evolve together.

Please continue

Beautiful story. Absolutely perfect

Toooooo short... I'm pissed!

I am so in love with this story and I'm only on chapter 4. You are a talented writer.

I read it again. Love it. It's perfect. Christian's transformation over these few days is wonderful. And he forgave his birth mom at the end. No words. The whole story is one big lyric.

PLZ continue with this story

You are such a creative writer. This story was beautiful. Beginning to end I was enthralled. I have also read your Fifty Shades in Fifty Ways and am awaiting with bated breath for the story to be completed. I am new to all this fanfiction. After discovering your story, I have read all you have written. If you decide to publish I will be first in line at the book signing. Keep up the amazingly creative work.

Awww that's so sweet. I thought lala would of been his
Mum, but I was trying to think of how it was shortened for Ella. Is this the end or are u adding more to it. Or maybe a sequel

Tears...lovely! I looked today on tumblr, I guess you aren't there anymore. You kind of left this at a conclusion, but I wouldn't be upset if you continued. They did, after all, again have unprotected sex. Wink, wink. You are a lovely writer.