|Reviews for Genetic Chaos|
| Lord Kelvin chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
So...he kidnaps eight, but seven are special?
There's some inconsistency between the summary and the annoying bolded note. The rows of zeroes are also annoying. FFN has separators in place. Use them. Also...
"without helping this brat creature will died"
Edit the story. There is something very odd about your English usage. Also, drop the notes. And rename the bird. Einstein is a silly name. SatAM Robotnik had a Cluck. That was a formidable robot chicken as explained in the plot, not footnotes.
Find an alternative to "his plans". I'm sure there are expressions you can use to avoid repeats.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.