Reviews for Out On The Town
purplelama101 chapter 3 . 7/16/2015
Really cute story I really enjoyed it. The whole story overall was well written and romantic even though the ending was pretty open to any possibilities pertaining to jerry and Kim
Jacy2882 chapter 3 . 10/7/2014
I love it. I love Kerry a lot I definitely ship Kerry and Kick but I love this one I think you should write more I love the cute lil names Kerry would call Kim even when they are not together. In this fanfic you could definitely tell Jerry and Kim have a connection. U love it. You should keep writing more.
optimistic girl94 chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
I nearly reared up. You may think the ending was simple but to me it was powerful. Something about the days passed really leapt out to me. I totally get what you mean! This is perfect. Your story is truly a masterpiece.
I think you should continue writing for Kickin'it the fluidity of your chapters are professional!

I love this so much. You are truly talented!
optimistic girl94 chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
Beautiful. The flow of the story is so graceful. There are no sudden stops that make the story feel choppy! Wonderful job! I absolutely enjoyed. I have always been a huge fan of Jerry's character. You have a superb talent when it comes to detail and characterization.
The scene with the musical and Kim's concern with Jerry being teased was great.
Can't wait to read more.
optimistic girl94 chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
One word genuis! I liked how you unraveled Jerry's character. On the show it was never about their back story. I always wondered how their story would be. This is a very believable story. The description and dialogue was flawless. I especially like the new characters! Jerry's mom and sisters, Kim's mom etc.

Again lovely job and can't wait to continue. I've read your other story which was phenomenal and have been wanting to check this out! Great job!
Awkwardasthon chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
great story. i ship three people kick,kerry, and kilton. i know wierd. i'm mainly kick but i do like a little kerry and kilton.
krstic chapter 3 . 12/2/2013
I'm not sure if I already reviewed your story, but either way, I love it so so much. You did a very good job of merging their characters and their emotions. You made Jerry and Kim feel real, like they were actual people, and the same thing goes for Milton. I'd love to see more of Jerry/Kim or Kim/Jerry from you, because you have a unique yet beautiful way of portraying their love. Your English is really good to. Keep up the great stories!
clarabella wandering chapter 3 . 9/13/2013
Oh my fucking God I'm sobbing. This whole fanfic I imagined me in Kim's place and my bf in Jerry's because our relationship is ao similiar. You're a fantastic writer. I'm seriously sobbing.
That Space Kid chapter 3 . 8/12/2013
I wish there was more cuz I 3 kerry
Guest chapter 3 . 8/3/2013
I cried when Jerry left. So sweet
iluvRossR5 chapter 3 . 7/16/2013
I always know I'm reading a good story when I look over and it's 2:30 in the morning, which of course I had no idea of. You're a talented writer and honestly, I like your story way better than the actual show. You give Jerry depth as a character and you really brought him to life. I love the way you write Kim. You did a great job of keeping her in character. Your story is realistic and relatable, thanks for writing it!
Brixon chapter 3 . 7/6/2013
Okay, seriously? Please just give us readers a little something. This was just the best fanfic I have read. And trust me I have read a lot. Your story made my heart just fly, fall, then soar again. Thank you for that. Cannot wait to see more from you.

Lots of love
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
I lurve kick to the bones but this Jerry / Kim story has me obsessed ! I think it's cute so don't make me wait long please
odditemi chapter 3 . 6/28/2013
I loved this story, you are an amazing author. Nearly cried at the end. xxxx D
Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
You can't do this to me. its like a cliff-hanger. so many feels love this story. badwolf7878
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