Huh... that’s it? She now knows the language?

I like Astra. I like the name also.

Instant attraction...

She’s special also. The doctor who felt sorry for Edward? Maybe he got her out or faked her death...? Or... maybe the doctors daughter that he was trying to hide...? He seemed nervous when the boss mentioned he was going to have a child. Maybe he he helped his wife get pregnant...?

Sad but he doesn’t seem to realize what he missed out on.

Poor baby...

All your stories are SO good! I have never been a scifi girl but you have such an amazing way with words, thanks so much for sharing your gift!

Such talent, fabulous story, thank you

Henlo, I am coming to extend a hopeful request. G*psy has become recognized as a terrible slur, perhaps change it to "nomad" or even Roma/Romani if you would be willing to research the culture. It's an incredibly rich and beautiful vein! That's all!

Loving the story so far, just wanted to point out a little thing during the conversation about Giidas food that made me uncomfortable.

Being half korean and half indian, I can attest to the fact that most Asian food is spicy. In fact, most asians tolerate spice better than americans and even some latinos, because we tend to mix spices and even reduce them into paste to cook, concentrating both flavor and heat.

So yeah, that part about her possibly being half asian is not really accurate, since Asia is more than just China, Japan and Korea, and her not tolerating spices is widely inaccurate.

Just that. Have a nice day.

Wow, what a treat reading this most excellent romantic thriller (if that's such a thing). Khai was EVERYTHING, and you kept true to the other characters in your own original way. I LOVED it!

Rereading this story again for the umpteenth time! Saw your update on your FB about writing the Eden sequel, so I knew I had to re-read this story!
My absolute fave FF story, ever.
KhaiAstra are GOALS.

Squealing and dancing happily!

This whole story was amazing! What a journey! Thanks for sharing

Absolutely love it! But I can’t find eden, I really hope you continue because you are one of my fave writers!