I can't stand "can't be bothered, snarky" MCs. The characterization is underwhelming and I for sure don't want to read the "Misadventures of Naruto and Issei" that's for sure.

Wow, hello, friend, I hope you are well, the truth is, when I started reading your fic: ''End Game Version R'' I was thinking of asking you if at some point you were going to update again, now after seeing the last update of your profile, I can only hope that you are well, I know that I am writing this to you a long time after the incident occurred, but now, I hope that when you remember your sister your heart is not filled with pain but with joy when you think of those happy moments that you shared together. Nothing, I just wanted to say that you had a lot of talent for writing
and I hope that now you are well and are fighting for your dreams, after all, I suppose that is what they would have wanted for you. Excuse my grammatical mistakes, English is not my language and I have to use the translator X'D. Good luck.

I read this crossover once where a character literally had just fought and killed godlike beings only to immediately come to Japan and die to fucking Raynare. It is just as ass as this one.

She's literally one step up from a basic human being. Does he ~have his power sealed~? Apparently fucking not since he teleported or whatever the fuck into Dohnaseek. So he just... let himself die? The way powerscaling in this universe works is that realistically Raynare wouldn't be able to pierce Naruto's skin otherwise. The people in this universe routinely shrug shit like that off, so I don't really get why he died? Just seems forced as hell so you can follow canon.

Thanks for the story

I love this chapter... more please...

Naruto who saves all the women he can. This is pure Naruto.
I can't wait for Naruto's relationship with Serafall to evolve. The idea of seeing Serafall pregnant and then with several children, their children. It's crazy but super awesome.
Wait to see more.

shutcho lame ahh up marco

My favorite part is with Serafell and Naruto.

This is not Naruto at all, this is some jerk MC who is trying to be "edgy" and fails at it. Naruto is kinda a badass when he wants it but at the same time he is kind and charismatic and somewhat naive but not in a bad way.

This Story was one of the best Naruto Stories I have ever got the privilege to read. This was the second time I could read it and it was absolutely awesome.
I am sorry for your loss. I cannot Imagine how you feel.
Despite I wanted to say that this Story was beautiful and interesting. I have many Questions: Is rias in Love with Naruto and practically lied to him, saying she doesn’t considering Akeno was hinting on something?
Is this Story an Harem story and so on?
And more questions that wandered through my mind while I was reading this.

I sincerely hope you may find the resolve and the motivation to update this and keep writing.
I wish you a Happy new Year:)

This. This is a complete and utter masterpiece. Im quite surprised i didnt find this earlier. The amount of depth and thought put into naruto and he rest of the cast is astounding and i love it. For years I kept thinking that naruto never never reached his full potential or depth due to his circumstances. But what happens when hes forced into a situation that takes away his go to tactics, he does what he does best, he adapts! This naruto is older and far more advanced both in terms of maturity, skill and overall experience. The people griping about this being NINO are confused. This isnt a 17 year old naruto jumping in head first and busting heads, this is a 25 year old thats far older and wiser than his younger counter part. As Madara said hes a perfect shinobi(somthing ive never seen naruto actually be)

Usually in crossovers naruto has some trauma and is either moping about or an emo. Then naruto just goes and spills his entire sob story with him reverting back to his old persona like nothing ever happened. This is neither and i love it so dearly since hes not lashing out or a depressing neet hes dealing with it slowly in his own way as it is realistically with trauma. Especially now that a certain furball is with him.

a damn good read

this is the worst version of Naruto I have ever read

great fic bro
sad to hear about your loss.
both of you were great writers and had such wonderful ideas and supplied us with many great fics .
all the readers are thankful for giving us this opportunity.
if you being here makes your heart hurts ,we understand.
take your time but remember your sister wouldnt want you to be sad and would want you to move on.

anyway I hope that you find peace

fuck yeah eat shit madaraf