|Reviews for End Game Version R|
| Genesis D. Rose chapter 1 . 7h ago
would a beta help the next chapter come out sooner?
| SeanHicks4 chapter 9 . 3/9
Interesting cross, I was almost hoping for a winged Kurama full on shroud with that last scene...
| The Richmaster chapter 9 . 3/8
This is a short but important comment:
Will Naruto ever actually use his sacred gear?
| NeroYagyuu chapter 3 . 3/4
Pfft! Kur0Kishi team...you guys really know how to write a story. Holy crap.
This has got to be the most entertaining Naruto I've read about till today. He's quite realistic...I can totally imagine a total badass saying "No shit" to someone doubting their abilities 10/10 times.
| Rake1810 chapter 8 . 3/4
Another great chapter - love this story so much more then the original. My only complaint (which is hardly a complaint) is that I loved it when you had one story i LOVED and then a couple others i liked. Now I can't decide whether i want to see an update to this or Unwavering Sky.
| FreshNerd chapter 1 . 3/4
| Stoneman303 chapter 6 . 3/2
Here I am at 2:15 in the night, impressed by Madara's speech about Naruto and then weeping like a girl, no worse than a girl, at the damn awesome reappearance of Kurama and the Story with the Shinigami.
I take off my hat for you, this is an amazing chapter and a great story in general.
To be honest I read your original, since this is the rewrite, and I absolutely hated the original, but this is simply awesome and I am only at chapter 6.
I am really looking forward to more like this.
Keep up the good work-
| Me chapter 9 . 3/1
Just read your profile. Whichever one of you wrote that rant on Naruto - If I could, I'd give you to Nobel literature prize. You clearly possess insight beyond 99.9% of humanity, and such talent must be recognized.
| MiskWisk chapter 9 . 2/26
Got to say that I love this fic. Maputo is just crazy awesome and the fight scenes when he messes around leave me cracking up and when he is serious they are incredibly satisfying. I really liked this chapter as well, the repeated nut shots were brilliant and I like the idea of the Thousand years of Death with a stun rod. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 9 . 2/26
I've re'read this and it's as good as it was in day one. The only thing that is missing is another chapter.
| Alucard The Destroyer chapter 9 . 2/25
I have got to say that even with the awesomely impeccable fighting, I laughed at the positively hilarious yet devastating tactics Naruto has deployed. I am immensely looking forward to what works of genius come forth in the future.
| Alucard The Destroyer chapter 4 . 2/24
An absolutely superb chapter 3 "Beyond Duty" (I am posting in this chapter bc i decided to re-read the whole fanfic because of the rewrite and i had apparently already posted for last chapter). Everything flowed so completely i got goosebumps. And the song selection was great as well, but I happened to be listening to a different song when i got to the last song attached section and thought it fit that portion a little better what with the awesomeness of Naruto destroying everyone Give it a listen and tell me what you think (I did listen to both to compare). The song I am referring to is "7 Devils" by Florence and The Machine.
The progression with Naruto and Issei in this chapter was intense and the scene with Naruto and Rias mellowed it out without it feeling cheapened. Loving the character development.
| jprocks60 chapter 9 . 2/21
| Hikari no Suzaku chapter 4 . 2/21
Bromance bonding between idiots; always worth reading XD
"Awkward people"; understatement of the decade, yeeesh... at least they finally got their heads a BIT out of their arses...
| Hikari no Suzaku chapter 8 . 2/21
...My man, I think it's safe to say no-one, and I do mean NO-ONE, has ever combined total badassery, comedy gold humor and heavy emotional moments quite like you have. You sir, are a genius, and I salute you; thank you for bringing these great stories to us, thank you