Reviews for End Game Version R
GotTalentJudge chapter 10 . 2/9
(Though my own preference would be to un-nerf Naruto) Everything is on point-the writing, spacing, comedy, originality, fluidity. 10/10 from me . Continue with your legacy
vegito89000 chapter 10 . 2/9
Love how the story is going so far; hope to see more.
Lord Hadrian Pendragon III chapter 10 . 2/9
take this story's idea and make a naruto story. it'll be super awesome. if you do PM me please i would like to read it very much. start it from shippuden and naruto should have all his chakra yeah he'll be over powered but it be awesome
Lightsbane1905 chapter 3 . 2/8
I don't want to know. WTF?
evans16 chapter 1 . 2/8
I have a question
is naruto a student of Kuoh and rias does she knows his age?
Umbra.Venator chapter 4 . 2/8
That... was...BEAUTIFUL! such awesome blackmail! so proud :)
ruce chapter 10 . 2/6
Ah that was so great, it was ridiculous on how naruto prank Azazel with a straight face, so damn humorous.
I wonder what happen to erza now
DanteAl999 chapter 10 . 2/4
Love the story and dynamic of Naruto being the ultimate trickster to cover for his reduced power, something I haven't seen too often and done this well. I am a little sad that the Rias group has been on the sidelines but its your story. Will definitely keep an eye on this story and look forward to the continuation of this amazing story. Have a good day.
dinon17 chapter 8 . 2/4
Love your guys story, I'm just confused as hell though about some stuff _
nopparitari chapter 10 . 2/3
Good chapter, keep 'em coming!
Ryner510 chapter 2 . 2/1
Headless Madara. Go figure lol
Good Stuff chapter 10 . 1/27
Well, I've gotten my fix of the good stuff for the day, but I need some more. So, I'd like to say that this is amazing, despite the few grammatical errors and such, and I will definitely be ceiling back periodically. This is one of those truly great fanfiction out there, in the great expanse of ffnet. Good job and good luck in your endeavors
AzrielG chapter 10 . 1/27
So much love for this! Can't wait to see what craziness is going to happen next :-D
Knight of elves chapter 10 . 1/25
I'm glad that you admit that this story contains an INO Naruto. That said, there is a good possibility of Naruto turning out like this. But I don't think that he would be this depressed and emo for five years... months? Maybe. Still I like the story and the development has reached a point where I can finally accept Naruto's characterization.
Keep up the good job I can't wat to see more from you!
RandomFicLover chapter 9 . 1/23
By the way, this review is for chapter 10 but I've already reviewed that chapter and I'm not going to guest review. So...

I really like this story, but I've noticed quite a few things that I just need to address. First, "Kavitrea Lathan" is not an anagram of "Katarea Leviathan". The first name is lacking a few letters and anagrams are a direct letter-letter correspondence between two words/phrases. Secondly, Sona Sitri's peerage has 11 members, not 10. Since Saji took 4 pawns for himself, that means there are 5 pawns (1 for Saji and 4 for the rest of the pieces), 2 bishops, 2 rooks and 2 knights with a grand total of 11. Lastly, with the ten Seraphs part, you gave us 9 names, not 10. These might all seem minor, and it is, but I feel that this should be addressed early so that these could be avoided. Minor mistakes they might be, but when they start to pile up it gets rather irritating. Frankly, I am still going to read this story because I like this Naruto, I want to know what happened to him exactly, and I want to know what will happen to him. I believe this is one of the best stories in the site, but I do wish you wouldn't make these mistakes. Since it means this story could be better, but it isn't. Anyway, have a nice day and keep up the good work.
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