|Reviews for End Game Version R|
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/6
Another "must protect issie-kun trope” author-san..
| arya304 chapter 3 . 9/2
OMG Ddraig's in love with our favoriate knucklehead! i never thought I'd see the day! lmfao!
| Sei Urahara55 chapter 1 . 9/2
First chapter and I'm already quitting this shit
| vparadox12122000 chapter 9 . 8/31
| vparadox12122000 chapter 4 . 8/31
| JustDusty chapter 2 . 8/29
I'm droppong this. I wanted a backstory but this is utter shit
| JustDusty chapter 1 . 8/29
CARE TO EXPLAIN? This is apparently THE naruto uzumaki from Naruto and NOT some random OC with his dumb bravado act and the name Naruto is a post 4th war Naruto and somehow he got killed by someone as strong as a genin with storm release? That was 10k words of progress in the story and we barely know anything about the MC except he's a weak ass fucking civilian who thinks he's strong enough to stand up to a murderer with wings and likes flaunting that he's powerful even though he got killed in a couple seconds after his speech. and this is without knowing that this is the strongest man on earth
| Archleone chapter 5 . 8/23
It really is a shame that this story is abandoned. This is maybe the third time I'm reading it, and it had a lot of potential.
I do, however, think that the pairing absolutely should be Naruto/Rias/Akeno/Serafall. Because DxD is a harem story, and there's waaaaay too many interesting interactions between these characters for friend-zoning to happen. It would just be utterly disappointing, particularly with how that dumb ass Issei seems to collect girls like pokemon cards while being a disgusting and useless perverted idiot. Naruto in this story is actually a cool and interesting person.
| NibberWithAHardR chapter 12 . 8/17
Goddamnit are you dead? If so I'll cry
| NibberWithAHardR chapter 5 . 8/16
This is giving off Third Can't vibes.
I fucking love it
| chimmichangaa chapter 12 . 8/11
for fuck's sake i wanna know what's special about Naruto's artificial sacred gear. At least tell us that of you actually use this id.
| BUFBUODA chapter 12 . 8/2
Your story is amazing. Thank you for sharing it with us all.
| 6258489 chapter 2 . 7/21
ugh, Issei is an idiot who doesn't deserve to live. any chance he gets killed off in a horrifying and humorous way? that would make this story, as long as Naruto doesn't turn into a simp. I'm just trying to figure out who I hate more, Issei or Sasuke? I'm in the middle of the chapter and hoping that Issei goes to the church on his own and gets himself killed and his gear stolen. that would make this an awesome story. Just a few paragraphs and I'm extremely disappointed. Madara? crazy end to this chapter. I hope that Naruto actually advances but I get the feeling it's going to be one step forward and there steps back...
| 6258489 chapter 1 . 7/21
ah, I'm sure you're not reading this but the way you made the blonde doesn't mesh with how you described him. I just mean, say that I don't give a shit about people, then packing my tent or whatever and moving at least temporarily is a lot easier than preventing a murder. Hell, it would have been easier just to clean up the mess so... ugh. My take on Naruto, he's lying to himself telling himself he doesn't care, blah blah, etc etc. In reality he's lonely and disillusioned with the world and looking for something to believe in or care about. stupid in my opinion but I'm giving this story a shot anyways.
| brachiosaurus chapter 12 . 7/19
hoping you'd one day came back