pretty sure its useless at this point, but if there is any little chance, would you consider updating any of your stories? you both are one of the best author i have the pleasure of reading your stories. if there is no chance of you guys ever coming back, then thank you for the great stories so far and hope you guys have a great life

this story has one of the deepest understandings of Naruto's character and thought process after he has matured that I've ever seen. Kudos to you, great author!

As for him being OOC. I not only do not care, I welcome it with open arms.
I totally agree with you that while his character has amazing potential in canon it is wasted to a stupendous degree. He is so much more than a miraculous intuitive genial clown that he is often portrayed at or merely an amazing judge of character.

Stories like yours that go even beyond that and show him as having an unparalleled understanding of not only character but of the "human conidition" as it is so famously called are rare and few.

Along the same lines pairing him with Serafall works incredibly well.
Showing her airheaded magical girl persona as, not only a mask, but something very consciously and willfully worn not in spite but _because_ of a similar _true_ understanding of how people think was amazing.

This story has easily taken a place among my personal hall of fame of best stories I've read in terms of being deep and meaningful.

you underestimate ninja. they were train to be fast, precise and aware. there's no way for naruto to to die at the hand of low level fallen angel. this naruto who fought in the war where he instinctually evade A attack who was supposed to the fastest ninja in the world. Naruto should have dodge by instinct alone. Period.

naruto at the end of the war should have gain that crazy power of understanding anything of chakra and universal thing so he should know how to remove the piece or construct a seal to circumvent the influence.

Wow, this is trash.
The logic you use for certain aspects in the story is just plain, sheer, absolute stupidity.

I stumbled across this and thought I'd give it a go. I then proceeded to read nothing but this until I had caught up on all the chapters.

This is a veryninteresting take on the most used way for Naruto to end up in the DXD world, though most don't use Madara. It is very well written and draws you in. I have actually burst out laughing at some moments, and been utterly rivetted to the action at other times.

I am very much looking forward to reading future updates whenever you are able to find the time. Thank you for writting such an enjoyable fic

What's up with fic's having any crossover character everyone die by the weakest fucking fallen angel in the series?

I know that what I am asking is kind of hopeless at this point but please update this story.

kiba learned how to swim... Amazing

That head was funny at first until the toilet threat, now I just feel extreme pity and unease at Narutos glee towards it

I find how easily he became a devil lame...like wtf? Come on! I would try to get my humanity back asap or at least get info about how much am i changed...genetics etc. But so far Naruto only "seems" to be an idiot who has some mental problems.

It seems he will be able to get the Excalibur fragments faster than I though.

In the same vein, it seems he is able to combine elemental manipulation to replicate kekkei genkai (here Mokuton).

Finally, I'm happy to see that his relationship with Rias finally is fixed on friendship, no love to fear.

Great chapter !

I just noticed I forgot to talk about Avalon in the previous chapters, but I really look forward to see if he will be able (or rather how he will be able to) repare her. A perfect defense would really give him a perfect boost of power. Plus, if he somehow manages to get the seven fragments of Excalibur... I really want to see that !

Now, it seems I was right about tweaking his Sacred Gear as he already wants to add some sensoring or healing powers.

Though, in the end what's was more important in this chapter was definitely his discussion with Belial. I was completely enraptured. Naruto will become one of the strongest being of this world. Trying to understand Ninjutsu and Ninshu at this point, how could he not ? If he has demon powers in that (and that's also valable for fuuinjutsu), I dare not imagine his future self.
That's even more true if he ends up recovering his true power, his chakra.
That aside, he throw an interesting question. Will he be able to replicate bloodline powers ? To fuse two (Hyoton), three (Jinton) or even more elements ? That would be revolutionary ! I want to see it.

I didn't expect his modified Jutsu was so complexe. He made use of his chakra chains, kinjutsu and fuuinjutsu to create something completely badass, so badass Madara totally respects him. A feat I must say. It was great reading that part.

That aside, I wonder how he will use this Artificial Sacred Gear. I doubt it will be to steal pants (unless it is ?), so I take it like every little things, he will tweak it until it has nothing to do with his original purpose, but will be much more OP.
I actually think the only reason he chose it over any other is that it is a passive ability and has no absurd activation cost. The function matters little, he will change it anyway. Eager to see what it will become.

That aside, I'm so happy to see Kurama again ! Well, we did already see it before, but not like that with a body. I'm glad for him !

Oh... so Naruto is also able to fight straight fights and not only using tricks. His low chakra pool really ended up making me think he was basically crippled. So I must admit that his little 'invention' is really welcolmed.