Reviews for End Game Version R |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great fic bro sad to hear about your loss. both of you were great writers and had such wonderful ideas and supplied us with many great fics . all the readers are thankful for giving us this opportunity. if you being here makes your heart hurts ,we understand. take your time but remember your sister wouldnt want you to be sad and would want you to move on. anyway I hope that you find peace |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck yeah eat shit madaraf |
![]() ![]() ![]() chapters are funny af |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a boring story. I just read it and get bored, and as far as I can tell there isn't a fucking plot at all. Nothing has changed from cannon I can't read any more of this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() He leído la biografía y joder al pasar una perdida así tiene que ser horrible, sé que ha pasado mucho tiempo pero sí escribir historias es algo que hacías junto con ella hacerlo seguramente te recuerda ella todo el tiempo entendible porque no retomar las historias, en lo personal esta es mi historia favorita de Naruto x DxD ten por seguro que si algún día la retomas yo estaré aquí para leerla. Un abrazo |
![]() ![]() Thanks for giving Azazel an ass kicking, I knew Naruto would do something about it, but I thought it was an ass kicking that would be given 5 chapters after which would be fucking annoying. I hate when they play off someone like Sirzechs or Azazel teleporting randomly into the room punching the MC of the fanfic in the fucking face sending them flying off the couch they were minding their own damn buisness on through 50 trees as a motherfucking test, only for the pussy ass MC who could probably fold Sirzechs with their mere existence to just shrug it off and act like the "bigger man" and letting it go. Like fucking fold the dude, I give as much shits about their morals as the pussy protags have inches on their non-existent dick. Like when some dude waltzes up into your room and proceeds to lay the hands on you? Man up, aim up and shoot up that hand into that self-entitled, arrogant, lazy "peace loving" asshole's upturned chin and show him why the story follows your fucking ass. |
![]() ![]() MUAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAAA FOOLISH, THIS IS THE POWER OF BEING LATE TO THE SHOW, HIATUS MY ASS IMMA MOVE ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER |
![]() ![]() ![]() update please? |
![]() ![]() With there was more tbh was enjoying reading this |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read your profile and I’m sorry you had to go through that. Losing someone close to you is always hard and something that you never really forget. I hope you’re doing well though and I wish you the best in life. I’m sure she would want the same. Have a great rest of your life, and if one day you finally get around to finishing these works that you two started together, I’ll be here to read them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is retarded. Naruto is just taking it up the ass because reasons. You're a brain dead monkey. Glad you abandoned this trash. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really love this story can't wait for new chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok i gave it a second cheance but fuck This Naruto is such a fucing pussy i just cant this fic is just FUCKING TRASH |
![]() ![]() ![]() … Your a fucking mad genius only This Bites! trumps craziness because it's a self-insert in One Piece |
![]() ![]() ![]() deus ex sasuke |