Reviews for End Game Version R |
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![]() ![]() ![]() still waiting for continuation |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, my birth language is Spanish, but that doesn't stop me from reading your wonderful stories. Now, I felt a horrible pressure in my chest reading the biography, I wanted to cry. I am very sorry for your loss, I am aware that it was more than a year ago, but the pain of a loss will always be something enormously horrible to bear. From Colombia, I send you a hug and all my good wishes. I love you both very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nothing i can say. Just really satisfying work. I hope this will continue. Keep fighting sir author. May your day bright like the sun and tranquil like a moon |
![]() ![]() ![]() You make a build up to be Naruto x Rias just to throw it in the trash... how stupid can you be? You just destroyed this for no reason and I will stay far away from anything that you write from now on. Disappointing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter. The way Naruto smeared Zeckram reminds me of the king of Babylon, Nebuchadnezzar in the Bible when God made him go crazy and he acted like an animal for a couple of years to humble him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 1. The main character of your novel gets enslaved through carelessness. I'm out, bye o/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() still waiting), do not rush, you can handle it, I believe in you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story. I got nothing else to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The end of the chapter had me laughing so hard |
![]() ![]() ![]() So am I the only one who loves this Naruto? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Here’s an ideaif you’re having so much trouble with existing stories, due to notes depressing you, why not try writing a new story? Perhaps a Bleach/Naruto story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is it someone as powerful as Naruto was resurrected by Rias? Ah, because you're an idiot. That's how. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is trash. No wonder you abandoned it lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() just read your bio. I'm so sorry to have read that. I don't know on a sibling level but My mother passed due to a hole in her heart last aug. So I can understand to a point and degree however it's still different. Miss your guys' stuff. all the love! |
![]() ![]() This is before I'm done the chapter, I actually was recommended this fic due to they way they deal with Riser as it said, and I quote, 'There is no way in hell I am topping End Game Version R when it comes to Riser' so I'm excited to see how this plays out. |