This is before I'm done the chapter, I actually was recommended this fic due to they way they deal with Riser as it said, and I quote, 'There is no way in hell I am topping End Game Version R when it comes to Riser' so I'm excited to see how this plays out.

Pity he is kind of a beta bitch

dogshit

naruto is a slave fogshit story

Issei and Kiba are both second years. So Naruto now has a ripped off Kirin, just less cool? Naruto DOES fight for peace, he inherited the dream from Jiraiya, Minato, Sarutobi, Obito, Nagato, Asura, Hagoromo, and even made it apart of his own dream. Naruto swore to bring peace (or was it world peace?), and Naruto never breaks his word. Because that's his Nindo. His Ninja Way. And Naruto NEVER gives up. You are making Naruto way too unnecessarily cruel and OOC. I feel like you just made an overpowered OC or SI that looks like Naruto and experienced things, and then transformed into the OC or SI half way. This story seemed good. I felt that this story had potential. But you even got the name of fucking Zeoticus wrong my guy/girl. I just can’t stand to keep going with these sorts of things.

You know, the anime portrays Raiser as worse than he is. He’s just an arrogant Issei in the Light Novels. He becomes a pretty decent guy after the Rating Game.

Naruto doesn’t kill. He only “killed” white zetsu’s. Koneko wasn’t treated as an experiment. Her sister acted as an experiment without Koneko knowing so that only she would be hurt and not Koneko. When that mad scientist was going to begin experiment on Koneko, Kuroka decided to act like she went mad and kill off her master and fellow Peerage members, but in fact, she was doing it to protect Koneko.

how can rias revive him in first place

Hi there, have read some reviews, didn't get into what difficulty you were/are experiencing, but still wish you good luck and hold a hope in somewhere way too deep to describe that you'll continue writing, don't get me wrong, just trying to say that reader cares for author at least a bit and is not pushing it with the next chapter, equally expecting it to be and not to be, hello from Russia ()_() -_- ()_() :)

P.S. love the Naruto character's recovery, going to read previous endgame now, bye, have a good time!)

Honestly, I hate Canon's Naruto, but the Naruto in your story is more annoying than the Canon version.

Just finished chapter 1. One of the most annoying things ever is the MC letting easily corrected misunderstandings continue to happen. I really hope this isn't going to be a continuous thing. Where Rias and her peerage say "oh Naruto you're too weak let us protect you" and he just goes along with it. Other than that the quality of this story is great.

Hello, I have read this story multiple times and have enjoyed it. You have my condolences for your sister. Take care of yourself, do what you can. We don’t expect you to upload or write anymore if you can’t. All the best.

this chapter really gave some solid John Wick vibe. I could almost point the fragment of "I'm back."

Damn, man, I was so happy to see the profile update and then I started reading the text...

I don't have much to say, but stay strong, try thinking of all the good times, the joyful moments you've shared, so that the burden of pain may become a bit lighter. Keep living and do your best to find the strength to enjoy the life for the both of you.

Be sure, that many of us, faithful readers, will be raising a glass in the remembrance and mentioning her in our prayers.

And remember, to live in hearts we leave behind is not to die.

Hey man, I’ve been reading your stuff for as long as I can remember and I always wondered what happened to you guys both… It fucking sucks to hear what happened to your sister and I wish you the best…