Reviews for The DIary of Zorro Riddle
Maisie Malfoy chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
Learn some grammar.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
Instant
The Formal One chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
You should add exploding penguins! Everything is better with exploding penguins especially when you have ... magic.
The Formal One chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
You should add exploding penguins! Everything is better with exploding penguins especially if they are ... magical.
gothgirl865 chapter 1 . 8/19/2013
I think that the premise for this story could be very interesting, but with the direction it appears to be taking now, you should be sure to label it as AU. Obviously, Tom Riddle doesn't have a twin sister, so that right there is grounds for labeling it AU. Also, Voldemort's parents died and he grew up in an orphanage, so either elaborate on his new back story or change it to reflect his canonical upbringing.

And not to be harsh, but you should really write more before you upload this to . 93 words is not chapter length. Flesh it out. Write at least 2 pages before you post it, and make sure you really introduce the characters (especially Zorro, since she is original, and therefore no one knows anything about her) and really give the reader a sense of their personality.

And why would she have to practice her magic in secret? She's a witch, and presumably a grown woman, if Tom Riddle is currently Voldemort in this story. She should have a job and a flat, and really shouldn't need to be practicing her magic that much if she's already graduated from Hogwarts. It's not like she can fail now.

Also, finally, sorry to nitpick, but it's spelled 'Marvolo,' not 'Marvalo.'
Alex Ivaniva Derevyenko chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
By the way guys this is the first day so everyday I will be adding on to Zorro's diary. Please comment but please don't put anything hateful on the comments, it's not worth it.