Reviews for CLM: Interlude 4 - The Beginning of the End |
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![]() ![]() ![]() an interesting chapter bringing up all sorts of issues. Enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() Great. I liked the way you addressed Dan being left at home to work most of the time. |
![]() ![]() Okay, thanks for explaining the Liam thing! I'm glad you're highlighting Dan and Trix's friendship so much. I'm interested in what chain of events Trixie's starting...you keep writing and I'll keep reading! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting |
![]() ![]() Really good. Great cliff hanger in a subtle way. |
![]() ![]() I like it, it brings up issues that they tactfully ignore in the books. Especially with the whole Dan thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your writing! And this is a great opportunity to understand the undercurrents between the characters. Thanks for the update. :) |