|Reviews for Faash goes skydiving|
| Distant Lights chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
I like this little story, mainly because Faash happens to be one of my favorite Danian tribe creatures. The idea is simple and sweet, but I feel that with some more work, it could become so much more (don't worry, I read your A/N in the summary, I'm just expressing my opinion). I wouldn't mind rewriting this for you. By the way, did you make that cover?
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