|Reviews for A Fight in the Name of Love|
| Natsuki D chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
HOW CAN U MAKE THAT A ONE-SHOT!
PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS PLEASE *puppy dog eyes*
| Mintleaf64 chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
It was cute and I liked it a lot! Please right more like this!
| Blackhatred chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
What do you mean this wasn't good? I really enjoyed it! Hope you update soon!
| Daphmir57 chapter 1 . 3/28/2014
*Laughing quietly* Cute. And remember, don't apologize for something you enjoyed!
| LunarSkyes chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
I like your story, but I can see there's some tense mix-up in the following sentences:
First, the sentence where Sting was replying to Gajeel about his relationship between Natsu sounds rather awkward. You wrote "Natsu's fighting rivals, and also his at love -", it doesn't sound flowy. Instead, you could've written "He wasn't liking this, these guys are Natu's fighting rivals, but they're also his rivals in love."
Secondly, the sentence where you wrote "Not a Fairy Tail." it would've sounded better if you used "from" instead of "a".
Lastly, the sentence regarding Gajeel exclaiming to Sting about Natsu being his business. It should be "my" not "mine".
Other than that, I really enjoyed your story XD
| blackagenda chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
what do you mean this wsnt good this was hilarious cant wit for the next chapter
| imjaysong chapter 1 . 12/3/2013
lol dont worry about this story, cause it was funny!
| LunarStar98 chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
XD there should be more to this! please continue!
| KitsuneHime18x chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
Natsu so dense lol! love it!
| ais2 chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
put some sex in it k
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
vivement la suite :)
| LinkinParkTheKillersFan chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Ahahaha, I never would've thought of the StiNa Or GaNa Couples. It was funny! Don't worry!
| LunaFaustus chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
That was very cute!
I actually quite enjoyed and yes, I did think it was funny :)
Love, LunaFaustus 3