Reviews for Gamma Draconis
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 1 . 4/16
Poor Harry. So many men and he has to end up with a Death Eater ferret.
musme chapter 7 . 12/25/2013
I love it too!
heksie chapter 7 . 8/11/2013
Lovely!
Diddleymaz chapter 7 . 8/1/2013
Really good.
How about a trilogy?
With a second unexpected pregnancy?
Draco this time, it happens on second honeymoons and they should get married.
CrazyCat chapter 7 . 7/25/2013
This story is ridiculously good. Your characterization is wonderful- they're canon, but older, which is hard to write. Your OCs (Lily and Isabelle) are beautiful in their own right; particularly Isabelle who I love despite her absolute lunacy! She's a crazier, scarier and sinister version of Luna and Trelawney lol.

I love the rawness of Harry and Draco's relationship. Not everything is roses; they're having problems, as normal couples do. And it's so bitter and raw in places that it almost feels suffocating, but in a good way, because it's yur powerful writing that has made me feel like that!

I'm off to explore your other stories now. Kudos on an excellent job well done!

-CC
Carling chapter 7 . 7/24/2013
Oh I'm kind of sorry it's over. I've grown to love this love story! I do hope the crazy secretary's cats got adopted out to good homes to non crazy ladies with better grooming and fashion sense!

I kept thinking Isabelle was doing something but couldn't figure out what since all the tests came up negative. Good twist in working that one out!

It was just great being back in their lives. I hope you do anger sequel about Charlie, but NOT threatening the marriage. Just a short one shot about the poor guy finding his true love. That was horrible, what happened to him.
wdlwbt chapter 7 . 7/24/2013
This is so wonderful. Thank you :)
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 7 . 7/24/2013
I'm sorry. Back the hell up. No comprendo.

I suspect that is Isabelle under Polyjuice. Harry wouldn't write that shit.

Didn't I tell him to fire her? Chapters, months, ago!

I knew she was to blame, if not how I thought. Still.

Lovely, smut-filled ending. Fabulous.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 6 . 7/24/2013
Draco had no right to bombard Harry's mind like that.

Draco called them a mistake. -.-

Draco's leaving him for a week. He says he's not running, but even I feel abandoned.

At least we know what it takes to bring Draco home now.

Aww. Parent blues.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 5 . 7/23/2013
Oh shit. Inhibiting draught? Harry's secretary has been drugging his coffee, hasn't she? I told him to fire her.

So Draco says he's not drugged. Bollocks, I say.

Oh, he's working from home today. I think since he's not going to get Isabelle's drugged coffee, he'll respond properly today. I wonder if he'll catch a clue. Or when.

Ugh. I KNEW Charlie was going to kiss him. And I bet fuck all Draco walks in a second later and sees. Shit shit shit. x.x

UGH! THAT WAS WORSE! That was public humiliation. And now Draco is definitely going to be insecure, thinking Harry fancies Charlie, is possibly cheating with Charlie. Bollocks.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 4 . 7/23/2013
I do hope Lily doesn't run away or something. But peeping was naughty. Though I can't say I might not have done the same. She's a hormonal teenage girl.

Aww. They proposed!

What do you mean Lily's been quiet? She must be gone.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
Oh. Draco assaulted him. Not cool.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 2 . 7/23/2013
Lily is snarky.

His secretary is vastly inappropriate. He could fire her.

Oh Harry.
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 1 . 7/23/2013
You're joking. You do not have Lily reading 50 Shades of Grey. That porn book? Her fathers are going to flip.

Oi. Can't keep it up. All bad.
Neverbird chapter 7 . 7/21/2013
Oh, phoenixstrike. You've done it again. Where to start?

Okay. First of all, the title of this chapter is perfect. Actually, this whole chapter was perfect - a worthy conclusion to a phenomenal story. The Castitudo Curse was brilliantly imagined (and, um, I would have paid about five million galleons to hear Prof. Binns talking about masturbation in class). Hermione as the voice of reason and logic was perfectly in character. Harry's fury toward Isabelle trying to control him was perfectly in character. Honestly, everyone has been perfectly in character. And livid Draco revealing his dark mark was absurdly hot.

I think one of the most uniquely brilliant things about this entire story is the way you explore the interplay between love, sex, and family in Harry and Draco's relationship - stress in one area ripples out to affect the others in ways that feel almost painfully real. Thank you for not shying away from the complexity of their relationship. I think I get a little weary sometimes of reading fanfiction where H and D have some kind of magical soul mate bond that exempts them from having to deal with the everyday stresses of being in a relationship. But I think that Harry and Draco are meant for each other because they've chosen each other and committed to each other, and are willing to put in the work to ride out the rough patches together. Your story captures that better than any I have ever read.

The ending was completely explosive, and totally worth the wait. But equally wonderful was the closing letter from Harry to Lily, and even the simple image from earlier in the chapter of Harry and Draco holding either end of Lily's school trunk and heaving it into the car.

Like all of your work, I feel lucky to have read this. Please carry on being a genius. I look forward to working my way through the rest of your stories.
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