Reviews for Torn
TimelessReader chapter 5 . 7/14/2013
nice update.
Quitting Time chapter 5 . 7/13/2013
Good update. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
CianieMoo chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
I must admit, I'm intrigued by this story. And I second the first comment's idea, if I say so myself :)
TimelessReader chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
Interesting take.
Quitting Time chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
Its good. I Have a question. Did they rent the bar or buy it outright. I guess they rented it with money they saved.
JustMe chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
I love the idea of them fixing up a bar together and growing closer but I find the lack of developed character and storyline a bit out of character, perhaps slow down future works and draw more from the cannon character personalities? Aside from that, keep going :)
Torigagged chapter 3 . 6/11/2013
I would love to see Tori gagged & tied by Jade for some sexual they please be
wearing stocking and garterbelts only.