Re-read this again and love it so much!

Such a sweet story. I'm glad that I found it. I don't know if I will read your unfinished story.
I really like thus sassy Lizzy.
Thank you for sharing your work.

Oh! The fireworks are about to begin :-D

All pure sweetness.

Crap!

SURPRISED Caro! Your dirty little plan didn't work. I hope that she thinks that it did work, until she's at the wedding... and Jane is a beautiful bride. And Charlie is standing at the altar waiting for Jane.
Then, after the celebration, sparks can fly! Give it to Caro GOOD!

I knew Caro was up to a drugged drink. I still don't think that Jane would have been able to drink much of the drugged drink. Unless Caro kept giving her drinks with them having a bit of whatever in them. That was dangerous!

I hate to think about what Caro put into Jane's drink. I would think that she is too busy to drive much of it. I hope that she is too busy to drink much of it.
I love your story.

This should be rich! Praise from Caro about Dear Jane. What a lark.

That first kiss went over like a lead balloon.

ODC are moving through a field of land mines. Turn this way, Caro. Turn that way, George. Turn another way, Collins.
Maybe the two of them could just hide in a closet together?

Dear Caro is wasting her time threatening Lizzy. She has zero interest in Darcy... yet.

The Foot-in-mouth Darcy strikes again! Good job.

And Dear Caro is in the house.
This will be fun.

This young "lady" is ODG on steroids! I can't wait until Darcy meets her! And Caro!
A great story.