Reviews for One Narrow Aisle |
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![]() ![]() Sad, but the plot thickens. Loved the longing from both parties. |
![]() ![]() Gasp...gasp... ouch! write more! |
![]() ![]() Oh Darcy! I hope she gets another chance to talk to him! Sad to hear that the story is almost finished.. Love your style of writing and I enjoyed every chapter of this story so much :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() (w/ Mary),,, Ballet slippers for after,,, Charlie is a crappy friend and should've taken a moment or you should just leave that POV out all together. Its very unsettling and "ugh worthy" |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAAAHHHH! Why?! Okay, I know why. Man up, Darcy! Or else Elizabeth needs to smack some sense into the poor man. Or better yet, Georgiana could do it! That would be nice to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Icy, icy chill... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loves it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fitzwilliam Darcy you get back there right NOW before I smack you. Said in my best Mom voice (and my 4 year old can attest it's a pretty great Mom voice) and I don't actually encourage violence. But still. Arg, Darcy stop being so Darcy-like! I just want to grab him by his lapels and shake him a bit to get some sense in him. Seriously, Darcy what do you think she's going to say now? Get your head out of your ass for a tiny bit and let her talk. I have all the feels for Lizzie. I'm glad Lizzie was able to talk about it a bit w/ Jane. *cry cry cry* Important question, did Richard make Mary laugh? Ugh, I'm kind of annoyed at Richard from the last chapter. Seriously, you really don't get that Lizzie is WAY into Darcy and not you? Get over yourself. It's like you super knew her or had any claim on her. Darcy's spent way more time and meaningful time w/ her. *hairflip* THREE more chapters? And everything will wrap up happily? Ah, stressed how the rest of this is going to go down. The reception will have to be at least 2 chapters? I'm awful at keeping my guesses out of reviews. lol. I don't think my previous prediction will be what happens. So I'm looking forward to what you'll give us instead! How many days until you'll give us another chapter? ; ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() No! You can't leave it there! Evil cliffhanger! Nooooooooooooo! This has to have more to read, quickly! Uh... Rant over now. Sorry. This is really good and I love it so much! It's awesome! |
![]() ![]() Initially I had decided against reading this, but then I got intrigued. I gave it a try, and by george, I liked it! So whens the nxt chap(-: BTW, nice writing! |
![]() ![]() noooooooooo stupid modern hunsford! noooooooooo! :( update soon please! im crying |
![]() ![]() aw! comeon! Elizabeth, where's your spunk? Poor Darcy. Poor Elizabeth. post soon! |
![]() ![]() Jane is the best sister, with all that wedding stress she still takes a moment for Lizzy! I can't believe Darcy is the one feeling rejected with everything Lizzy is going through :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I just started this story this morning and i love it so much! Post ASAP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooo! Catherine is a bit like Lady Russell right now; she couldn't convince Anne to leave Frederick until she told her that the marriage would harm Frederick. Elizabeth would not respond to a true threat, she's too brave (and proud) for that; she would, I believe, bow to external pressure to help someone else. Poor Elizabeth! I'm hoping that Darcy will take some time to reflect on her words, really thinking about the fact that she literally just said (and more importantly, actually MEANT) "It's not you, it's me." Thanks for sharing; I look forward to an update. |