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  Kristina chapter 4 . 7/21/2013 The way Lizzy got better of Caroline was brilliant! I just hope (for Darcy) that he doesn't listen to Caroline and tries to talk to Jane properly.. |
| Kristina chapter 3 . 7/21/2013 I hope she doesn't grow to attached to Wickham.. I really like Richard and I think Louisa isn't mean, but should be quite nice! I hope Lizzy gets to have a word with Caroline! |
| Kristina chapter 2 . 7/21/2013 Nice chapter, I like Charles and love the change of perspective! I hope Darcy comes to the right conclusion soon ;) |
| Kristina chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 Very nice story, I absolutely enjoyed it and can't wait for their first encounter! I think you captured Elizabeth and Jane the way they would be in the modern world :) |
 JupiterAnne chapter 14 . 7/21/2013 Ah, so this is Caroline starting to fill Jane up on drink (just drink?) as part of her plot. I am concerned for her - as Caroline seems a bit desperate (being short on time to do this and so forth) and she might get sloppy with carrying out her plan. Looking forward to your next update and finding out how this is going to unfold. Thanks for this latest update : ) |
| kadee23 chapter 14 . 7/21/2013 I can't wait for your updates, I love your story, your characters let me smile, even the bad ones are good for a laugh! |
| ImprovementByExtensiveReading chapter 14 . 7/20/2013 Ah, yes there will be a one night stand hook up! Yes? YES! Oh, but will be a one night stand or the beginning of forever? How cheesy was that line? I can't wait until the next chapter. Earlier today I was thinking about this story and wondering when the next update would be. And here it is, lovely. While I'm tempted to further flatter, I would like to say I'm genuinely in love with your story. Also, I love the addition of Grandma Bingley and hope we get to see more of her. But more D&E interaction will always win out over other characters. |
| JupiterAnne chapter 13 . 7/19/2013 OMG - I just found this story and spent today reading it. This is a FABULOUS story! I am so in LOVE with your characters! You have created some awesome personalities for the P&P crew, the adoring ones we love and the ones we love to despise. And your story line is fresh and well written. I was so sad when I got to the last chapter you posted. I do hope you plan to keep this going...I am hooked and must see (or read) where you take this. I have only stopped reading these last few minutes and I am jonesing for more. Please do update soon. |
| Chjara 13 chapter 13 . 7/18/2013 Better and better ! Caro is so em... Caro! Who is Fiona actually ? Plz continue, i do love your story ;) |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/18/2013 yes and no! yes to the gambling ring. I like Georgianna's rebellious streak and no I'm not looking forward to Fiona. but the hilarious exaggeration of wedding party scenes are all too familiar: good job! |
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/18/2013 This is a 'wonderful' story. I love it. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/17/2013 It's great that Georgiana and Lizzy get on so well together. Collins is a creep, why can't he just get a hint? |
| Onestra chapter 13 . 7/19/2013 I actually don't like modern versions but your story is simply wonderful ;-) funny and entertaining. Please keep on writing. |
| kadee23 chapter 13 . 7/18/2013 "wonderful!" ;-) |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/16/2013 eee I love that they are flirting more... and Elizabeth/ Georgianna hitting it off is a riot. I can't wait to see how they handle Lady C |