Reviews for One Narrow Aisle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness. I absolutely loved this chapter. You are such a talented writer, please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() So... kind of Hunsford-ish, but Darcy didn't put his foot in his mouth nearly enough for that, so... Hunsford pt. 1? Before they actually misread each other totally, and he admits to feelings in the most arrogant manner possible while she silently fumes? I really liked the Bollywood dance number suggestion, by the way! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! I freakin' love this story. When I read the summary and the first chapter, I thought Elizabeth might be OOC (I don't remember why? maybe b/c of the tattoos?) but she's totally not. Darcy kissed her and then couldn't tell her why. *squuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeee* Just adorable. I'm kind of hoping they see each other again before going to sleep. Another tea? He goes to her room/she goes to his room to talk. Such a sweet moment when Darcy was talking about his family and Elizabeth gave him a hug. Come on Darcy get it together so your cousin won't get to her heart first! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! I can't believe, this is your first one! Super well done so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is sooooo good! I'm so glad I found it because I love modern day P&P and this is so well written. You're doing great for your first fic! Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOONNN! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN AAAHHHH |
![]() ![]() Love their interaction |
![]() ![]() too wonderful. keep writing. |
![]() ![]() Amazing, beautiful, charming, ... I could go on for ever. |
![]() ![]() Gosto muito. |
![]() ![]() I am totally loving the fake couple thing, and how they are trying not to like it as much as they do. Your tattooed Lizzy is brilliant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh. Nice little gettin to no u session... |
![]() ![]() I loved this chapter - that was some intense conversation! |
![]() ![]() ![]() EEEEEEEEEEE! I love that Lizzie opened the door to Caroline like that. LOVED it. SO MUCH. This entire chapter was just great. I really enjoyed them drawing on one another. So intimate and just adorable. That was a really lovely scene. Hmm, so will Richard pursue Lizzie or is he just messing w/ Darcy? I guess we'll find out eventually. I kind of hope he's just messing w/ him, but that might not be as interesting. More, more more, please! ; ) |