Reviews for One Narrow Aisle |
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![]() ![]() My uncle has a Panama hat to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's getting better and better all the time. The Caroline - Collins interactions with D & E are hilarious. I hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read your story all the way though today. I really enjoyed it, thanks for posting something awesome and well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story - Love Lizzie's tattoos - hanging out to see what happens next ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, Collins. Can you ever not be obnoxious? I did appreciate his dramatic fall. lol. I loved D&E smirking at one another being in uncomfortable spots w/ Caroline & Collins. Hmm, not sure what happens next, but is the boat still moving? I might have missed that in the story. Can't wait for the next chapter! So good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goodness I am very upset with you at this moment. How colds you just leave me hanging like that! Seriously, I love this story. I love funny Darcy so much and Caroline getting stuck; hilarious. Pleas update before I die from an anxiety attack. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this the end? It's so good pleas update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice teaser! Jeepers...have the rest of the Bennets arrived? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happen next? With any luck caro and billy will get left behind in the water! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write more soon. I loved it! |
![]() ![]() Looking forward to the boat |
![]() ![]() LMAO that was funny. I love Caroline threatening Elizabeth and she's like 'fine by me'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, I can just imagine the bathing suits. Elizabeth's going to wear something retro and sexy à la Bettie Page, and stick-thin Caroline with her awkward (and embarrassing) gold lamé thong... No competition there! It's funny that with certain things, less certainly is more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely terrific story, can't wait for more. Had a smile on my face throughout the six chapters so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is good! Hmm, this will be hilarious w/ Elizabeth thinking they're engaged. Darcy will probably be checking Elizabeth out the whole time. And Caroline? She'll be tacky and over the top like always. Ha, I can just picture her in that ugly suit while everyone else looks normal. Yes, that will really set you apart in Darcy's eyes in the worst way possible! Charlie isn't the only clueless one. I can't wait for the next chapter! ; ) |