Reviews for One Narrow Aisle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() looking out for more! it's very interesting to see how all the characters we know so well turn out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so she finally meets Darcy! I'm eager to see what happens with Wickham. I love that she has so many tattoos! Update soon, I can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Things are warming up! The stage is set for Darcy and Elizabeth face to face! Post the update soon, pwease! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor jane. And look out darce! |
![]() ![]() wonerful start. Very promising story! |
![]() ![]() Oh no, he better not stop the wedding. He seems a bit OCD about neatness. He hasn't seen Caroline in years so he really shouldn't believe anything she says about people she doesn't really know |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another awesome chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Caroline and Darcy's conversation was inane (I can see them together, barely speaking unless united in hate, he willfully blind). I don't have any sisters so I don't get what's wrong with having four of them, unless they were all like Caroline. If Caroline and Darcy don't agree to the wedding, isn't it almost too late? They'd have some leverage if there was no pre-nup but canceling a wedding is so expensive and public a breakup. My only consolation here is that Caroline calls William Mr. Darcy, so it sounds like there is a formal distance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an interesting start! I love the idea of full sleeves on Elizabeth-I can totally see her not caring about another's opinion and going against the social norms (regardless of the era). I wonder if Darcy has tattoos... And I agree with Elizabeth; Mr. Elizabeth Bennet has a wonderful ring to it. I hope you update soon; I can't wait to meet Darcy! :) |
![]() ![]() Interesting beginning. Wow, Charles moved country for love, so sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing start! I can't wait for more so please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Elizabeth's smile grew as the thought of having a day to acclimate to Charlie's relatives without her parents and sisters present. "Well, perhaps without Mom and Dad here I'll be able to get to know the future Mr. Elizabeth Bennet better. Do you think he'd have a problem renaming his company to The Mr. Elizabeth Bennet Company? He will take my name, you know. It does have such a nice ring to it." I love Elizabeth's optimistic sarcasm. Too bad you didn't refer to her dating history. Will Darcy make the insult becausem |