Reviews for One Narrow Aisle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear lord |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous meeting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that’s sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m worried about the devilish duo |
![]() ![]() ![]() That’s hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh lord what a witch |
![]() ![]() ![]() Badly done Darcy |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this is going to be bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Foolish man |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don’t be a fool Darcy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting premise |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are a very skilled AU writer...you tie in the character traits so well. The only thing that is hard for me is the Hallmark-esqe timeline. It moves through the relationship so fastwho goes from not knowing anything about another to hatred to true love in just a few days? But regardless of the realism of the timeline, you accomplished a lot by the plot point of the tattoos. Very well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun story! I loved how you kept the characters and chemistry between the couples. Even in the modern setting you were able to keep the personalities pretty true to canon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Caroline is a vile, nasty bitch and I want to smack her! I wonder if Karma will get her |