Reviews for One Narrow Aisle |
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![]() ![]() This is a really cute story! I like the whole tattoos thing because honestly it is pretty accurate divide in a sense but I also loved that you kept his name as Fitzwilliam. Everyone just changes it to Will. Thanks for writing this. so nice so sweet. Hope you're good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this so much! This is about the fifth time I've read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yayyyy. It'd be super awesome to see how they are faring in London! Lovely story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tear, sigh, sob. The wedding palooza journey is over and what a lovely trip it was. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jane and Bingley are two of my least favourite characters in P&P, but I'm loving them here. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You asked for editing errors. I suppose someone has already provided "Darcy looked at his cousin, murder on his faced and perhaps even his mind as Louisa interjected." As to grammatical errors, this may be too late. I am enjoying the action for now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm loving the Georgiana as Avril Lavigne image. And the two tag teaming Dacy is brilliantly funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see a "fake girlfriend" in Darcy's future and is he in for a surprise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm belatedly reading this and had planned to only bother you at the end. But that was such a laugh out loud chapter, I had to say good job, my dear. Too funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! I just loved your story! I discovered it yesterday and I couldn't put it down until the end. It was so sweet and funny. I can't believe how close they became in just four days! I'd love to read more about their new beginning in England and Elizabeth's acceptance from the society. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a lot of fun. As vivid and dramatic and memorable as a well made chick flick. I'm still thinking of suitable actors though! But great read, with all the cliffhanger chapter endings. Loved georgiana and louisa\hurst. That poor guy is rarely likeable and he was very likeable in this one. Missed Charlotte though. Collins totally made up for it anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS STORY! Wonderful job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow okay honestly this is the first and only modern P and P fic I have ever read. well done! I had no idea what to expect but I am impressed. Only negative is your readers never get to see Caroline and GW get thrashed for trying to break up the wedding, ah well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! It was engaging and not smutty. I especially enjoyed seeing Darcy and Elizabeth recover from that truly disastrous first meeting. I look forward to reading more of your work! Thanks :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stayed up till 3am reading this! lovely story (': |