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![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute at the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() But Fred and George are twins AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
![]() ![]() ![]() "...the young wizard grumbled in his sleep and snuggled up to him, twisting and turning until finally, he was draped over Voldemort's chest. It seemed he would have to stay here this day." Harry Potter is now a cat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I first started reading this story I was unsure of what to expect. I knew I enjoyed the style and how the characters interacted, especially in the early chapters. However I really didn't expect this story to go the way it did. I enjoyed it, I really truly did. Yet there is a large part of me that really wished Harry had become darker than he truly was, that he had embraced battle more, and was more active in the war. I also really wanted to see more of the Master of Death stuff. I was so excited when it finally happened, but equally as disappointed since it was at the end. At any rate, this was still an epic and I love how it was written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far I absolutely love this story. I started reading it shortly before I planned to head to bed. However now I can't put it down and it looks like sleep may not be happening because I can't stop reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG WOOOW! Idk how I found this but I’m really sooo glad that I read it, at first I feared that I’ll get bored by how long it is, but I’m so happy that what I thought was wrong and every chapter made me excited to see what’s next. I’ll miss this so much, thank you for writing this masterpiece 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I made it to chapter 21 before I skipped to the epilogue. I guess I wasn’t as much in the mood for smut as I thought I was when I started this story. While the smut scenes were written well, some of them were off-putting and gave me bad visuals. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I could have done without the twincest, but considering I’m reading a story about a 70-something year old having a romantic relationship with a 15-year-old, I can’t be complaining too much. I still prefer the Tomarry pairing when Harry time travels to the past where they’re the same age, but this story has been interesting enough, so far, for my brain to not focus on that aspect of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start to the story. I’m just sitting here wondering about Harry’s stuff that he already told Voldemort was locked up under the stairs that they left without, not to mention his cloak and other important things that he always hid under his floorboards. They left without any of that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was absolutely wonderful. The insane HP LV lover that I am I binge red or binge listened to this in like every free moment that I had. so I think it took me less than a week. maybe a little bit more. I don't know but it was absolutely wonderful. I could really get myself into this and I loved how the story evolved. you are an amazing writer and now I'm really jealous as a writer myself |
![]() ![]() I don't know how to feel about this. I really enjoyed the story and it was well written, but Harry and Voldemort were both in-name-only characters. Might be better as original fiction? It doesn't have too much dependence on Hogwarts or anything, it could be converted pretty easily I think. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intenso! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amando tudo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. Definitely worth reading. |
![]() ![]() Gf |