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![]() ![]() Oh that's a nice twist! Death wanting to influence the world so there is always life and he/she/it has a purpose! great idea! I think I never saw that one before :) Really like your story (have read the earlier parts more than once by now) and am curious how you will bring it to a close. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! Cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit, I'm glad Harry's taken on a bit more of an important role. I mean, it's great that he gets to play Quidditch as he loves to do, but I really think he's capable of more. My favourite example is how he tempers Marvolo's harsher rulings and darkest urges. It's interesting to see that he's now the biggest thing holding Marvolo to life, as eventually all his other Horcruxes will be destroyed somehow. It sort of makes them more equal in importance - and really, I don't know why this is about equality for me, but somehow it is. I'd be very interested in seeing "the end", so to speak - what will eventually happen to Marvolo? What will happen when one or even a few of his Horcruxes are destroyed? Will he go insane again? Will Harry keep a part of him always, and if so would he have Marvolo's memories? What would happen in that case, if/when that's the only part of the Dark Lord left and he still wants to be in power? So many questions... But anyway, I've rambled on enough. I think I like where this is going. Keep it up. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() good update thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesomeness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I think Harry handled trying to explain why he had joined Voldemort to Sirius in the wrong way. Had Harry said anything about Voldemort healing him or stopping him from considering suicide Sirius would have likely been more open to changing sides himself. Instead Harry focussed too much on the intellectual, when his first real reason for trusting Voldemort was that the man healed him. Sirius would probably have understood that reasoning far better since he himself had been abused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello dear, i gave this sotry quite few days of my life, I hope you will continue :) i loving it very very much. Its beautiful and excited. I cant wait for next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome ! Plz, update soon ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope harry can become an animagus soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much! Cant wait for more! |
![]() ![]() I really like this story. I have been reading it for a long time. Its one of my favorite fanfictions actually... But I feel like you are dragging it out. You already had the climax, falling action, et cetera. Maybe you should have one or two more chapters to wrap things up and then an epilouge. Or if want, you could make a sequel. Your story is great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good Harry that man really wanted to have Kingsley's head and i'm happy for the revenge you finally got on your familly |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh myyy... looks like i didnt read last 2 chaps... damn i love it... new world and stuffs... just awesome... i hope there wont be many idiots to fight... really, harry and voldy should have nice time for while... hope you will update soon |
![]() ![]() Great chapter! Hopefully there will be more Charlie/Xaphia (smut?fluff?) and Marvolo Harry fluff soon. |