Reviews for tenderness is the only weapon left
Nikkette chapter 2 . 10/7/2014
Aww. I loved this. I really did.

This has to be my favorite chapter of the two you've written so far. I loved the heart-to-heart talk Thor and Natasha had

PleasepleasePLEASE update again soon! I wanna see this to the end! :D
Nikkette chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
Wow! Such an unconventional pairing! I love it! :D

This is really good so far, and though this chapter was suuuper long, I liked it loads :)

ThorTasha all the way! XD
Supabec chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
awesome story so far
hope u continue
i haven't read thor/natasha pair yet and i got to say "i like it, another" might be my avenger OTP couple
thank u :)
PanicMoon15 chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
Just found this and LOVE it. Not enough Nat/Thor fics out there and this is just written so amazingly. I can hear the characters voices in my head, you've captured them so perfectly! Update soon, please. Xxx
Xelcior chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Good fic. Although, I think I know why it doesn't have many reviews. It's Too Long. One chapter having over 13000 words. Too long. The first time I saw that, I honestly moved on, until I decided to finally try it. After a few hours.

Okay, maybe you're not familiar with the comics, but it's obvious you're familiar with the movies. In both the comics and the movies, Thor is just as durable as the Hulk himself. It's Impossible for Widow to actually cause Thor to flinch, let alone bleed. What Widow did was like saying that she could hurt Hulk with a punch to the face. Physically not possible.
When I saw that I was like, "whaaaaat?"

Anyway update soon. This is honestly the only decent Thor/Widow story on this site, in my opinion.
Kist chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
Love it! I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews than this; it is a great fic, and I love your portrayal of the various characters. I can't wait to see what part 2 has in store. :)
PeytonSilver chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
I haven't read one good Thor/Natasha fic until I stumbled upon yours. So glad I did! I hope you continue, I know this pairing is slightly odd so don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Yes! more nuanced Thor please (hate the dumb brute fanfic characiture) And Your Natasha is great.
One thing, I doubt BW's punch would have hurt Thor or made him bleed, dude is even more durable than the hulk.
Please continue writing.
CookieMonsterismyfriend chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Awww! I loved it! You got Tony perfectly!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
You actually made me ship Thor/Natasha?! I don't know how... oh wait it was through your amazing writing and characterization :) Seriously, I loved the first chapter and am eagerly awaiting the next installment. Please update soon!
Maia2 chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This is a very good start. I like the slow build, the realistic way it goes about the formation of the team (the real team). I like there's distrust, conflict, clashes. I really like the way you captured the personalities. Tony's boastful brashness that hides his deep insecurities and need to be accepted. Cap's constant confusion but loyal and steady calm. Bruce's shyness and constant pulling back. Clint's weirdness. And of course, Thor's honesty, positive attitude, straightforwardness, his deep, deep sense of loyalty and love. And Tasha's... everything. Her insecurities, her strength, her analytical mind, the way she can read everyone, including herself. Her calming attitude and calculating insights. Her need to belong, to be useful, busy.
Really cool.
Glad she and Thor talked about Loki. Poor Thor, so conflicted. But that's his brother, he's loved Loki for centuries. Really cool.