|Reviews for The Summer Room (SUSPENDED FOR NOW)|
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/20/2017
Hi I like your story and I liked the previous one the lord of the rings one
mostly because you add an oc but they actually affect things in the story unlike most oc
who just seem to tag along the ride so yeah this story is cool
so I really hope you will continue to write
and hopefully these charecter will save some of the Durin line
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Hello, I have no quarrel with your story or your writing, on the contrary I admire your skill and you your confidence in posting it too the Internet for anyone to read and enjoy. I would however like to point out that there is an OC main character tag and, given the fact that several of the main characters are most certainly ones that you created, it should definitely be a character tag used for your story. Since OCs are main characters, not using the OC main character tag says to a reader that they do not play an integral role in your tale, which is of course far from true. This makes your story harder to find for readers who would like to read a fanficton story with an interesting original character. If they use the search function to look for stories with an OC main character they will be unable to find this story. Inversely if readers are averse to OCs or simply not in the mood to read a fanfic containing one and they decide to use the search function to show stories not tagged with OCs, your story will still show up, which can be frustrating.
That being said I would implore you to keep writing, our world needs more story tellers and imagination, but to please use the main character tag system that has in place. It is there for a reason and makes using this site to read fanfiction much more enjoyable.
| laura0506 chapter 20 . 12/22/2014
Remember me? Hello again! I'm sorry I haven't been reading your fic for ages but I've been busy with life. When I got alerted that you uploaded a new chapter a few hours ago, I read it immediately.
I only have to say that I enjoy reading this story and wait for your next update, and have a merry Christmas!
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 9 . 1/8/2014
The thunder battle was always a cool part. *slaps Thorin*
| laura0506 chapter 17 . 1/5/2014
Hello, again! XD This is my review and I'm saying... 'YAY! ' . This is a really good chapter and it made me happy. I really love this story xD
Anyway... I like it when you introduced ur new OC. I like her. XD I also have a question in mind of her being turned into an elf. Can that happen? It's amazing how you did it, but it made me curious.
Well done and I look forward to the next chapter xD
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 8 . 12/7/2013
Wow XD SamxBilbo takes to the skies!
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 7 . 12/7/2013
Rivendell! Yes! That Warg chace was described well. You are such a good author!
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 5 . 12/6/2013
And yeah, Lizzie is pretty darn obvious XD
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 6 . 12/6/2013
This whole chapter... I'm dying, seriously. Awesome!
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 4 . 12/6/2013
KilixLizzie action! And BilboxSam action! *dies*
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
Call us nerds if u will, but when I was little and we had all read The Hobbit, my family and I used to sing that song (the movie uses a different tone, though) and we also sang roads go ever on and on from LOTR. This chappie was cute!
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 2 . 12/6/2013
Of course Lizzie would trip on everything in existance (as soon as I saw the pov, I immediatley thought "she's gonna trip on something" I was right) And Sam's first line (and last) were perfect. Again, hilarious!
| not-active.abandoned-account chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
I knew that music room was fucking magical! And I'm laughing so hard... I can see all of you doing these things perfectly XD
| laura0506 chapter 15 . 12/2/2013
1) Yay! xD you updated! also, that last Millie and Ori bit really made me smile. . Also thought the bit with Kíli and Elizabeth and her iPod was cute.
2) Thank you SOOO much for reading and reviewing my Hobbit and Sherlock stories. You have no idea how happy I feel right now. Thanks again xD
3) Ha! you know my name! well, seeing as my name is laura0506. It's a bit of a hint xD
4) Thank you for writing marvellous stories and making me feel happy on a dull and boring day. It really helps! Like as Ori said to Millie, you have a gift in writing. Don't you dare stop
5) Please remember to update soon
| laura0506 chapter 13 . 9/24/2013
Yay! A new chapter! . It's me again - pippintook1 but i changed my name because it caused some confusion - long story. Anyways...
Amazing! I'm quite annoyed as well - don't worry! it was nothing about this chapter - it was that i wasn't emailed when this chapter was posted (grrr) xD but it's a brilliant chapter.
I'm quite confused though. Is Millie with Thorin or Ori? I thought you agreed Ori? Or is it going to swerve to Thorin or back to Ori? Sorry - it's just ORI! XD XD XD
But anyway, i think you should post the next chapter in December, but try to save up some sweet fluffy moments in the meanwhile. Start a new short story between now and then? Just a few bright ideas, because honestly, I miss this story. And I can't wait til December for three reasons...
1) The next chapter to this!
2) The Hobbit: A Desolation of Smaug in the cinemas!
3) C'mon, we can't forget xmas -
Thank you once again, and keep writing! xD