Reviews for Ghost of Utopia
silverfoxkurama chapter 11 . 7/31
hello nice fic I'm only up to chapter 11 obviously but is the endgame of this fic a threesome or is it like she picks one of them in the end just would like to know
Kylo Ren Emily Skywalker chapter 7 . 7/12
Looking forward to the next chapters :)
Elliebelle4444 chapter 7 . 7/12
Only just had time to read the new chapters and it's so good. I've always found this chapter really funny.
Molly Grace 16 chapter 7 . 7/11
Good chapters. I liked the development.
Dez10d2Rite chapter 2 . 6/19
I really like this. I've been marathon all Star Trek since I heard what happened to Anton Yelchin and this is the best fanfic I have read yet. Can't wait for you to update again!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12
"she was flawed and broken" uh yeah if you say so okay

quirky OC name? check.

potential threesome with two male leads? check.

stop. just stop pretending that this is not some Mary Sue writer-fantasy insert of some sort jsut stop

omg just stop pretending you like a scifi show except the leads' faces, go get porn and rub one off and delete your account lmao
writingNOOB chapter 23 . 2/18
yeah, i'm on the leo/arden ship for sure. poor thing...
writingNOOB chapter 24 . 2/18
I hope that you update soon! God, I'd like to see her in this 'winter soldier-like' scenario. she's enhanced, yet doesn't remember anyone. so when she's on 'missions', it's shocking to the crew and jim, leo, and the crew are desperately trying to help her.
Elliebelle4444 chapter 24 . 12/23/2015
Just finished shes dead OMG wow this is so amazing
Elliebelle4444 chapter 4 . 12/22/2015
Your grammar is awful for exam you put "as he drive back" this is completely wrong you are meant to say as he drove back . You can't put drive back because your not talking in 1st person .
Elliebelle4444 chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
This is rubbish and your grammar is awful sort it out !
el33ri chapter 4 . 11/21/2015
Poor, Jim...
el33ri chapter 3 . 11/21/2015
3 grumpy Bones :D
el33ri chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
OMG! Hilarious :D
Guest chapter 22 . 9/24/2015
Nooooooooooo I'm not getting tired of the story! I mean, do what you will with it, it's your story, but I am personally very much enjoying it :) I'm really curious as to how Arden would interact and fit in with the movie with Khan.

Your writing is flowing and elegant, and I love your original character!

THE END OF THIS CHAPTER CLIFF HANGER

DUUUUUUUDE

anyways, thank you so much for sharing your story and creativity with us! I'm sorry if you aren't seeing a lot of reviews to reflect people's enjoyment (I know sometimes i feel like I don't know how to say what I feel). Good luck with whatever you do!

-brenna
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