Reviews for Past After the End |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed the story up to this point. I cant take the interruptions any more, though. I love the commentary but it really takes away from the story, and it's hard to follow along with. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My goodness, you almost had me yelling at my phone for all the interruptions you kept throwing in. Good job! |
![]() ![]() *reads the end *starts clapping passionately |
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![]() ![]() Stop squeezing my neck |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this! You awesome girl! But now I need more I'm totally lost in fiction about these stupid babys! It's hilarious to read about all the drama and smoching they do at the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Ed saying, "Stop squeezing my neck!" Is that even close |
![]() ![]() really good story but holy fuck, are your ramblings in the AN annoying and cringy as hell. tone it down man |
![]() ![]() ![]() {Insert violent fangirling here} |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *screeches* THIS IS SO CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOSH I LOVE I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! *Gives orange juice* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, those two... *cuddles* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic! |
![]() ![]() UUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW! |