Reviews for Past After the End
HCP chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
One, how did Ed get to WInry's room without a leg?
Two, summaries really help someone know whether they would be interested in the story; they're pretty helpful things.
Three, your characterisation of Ed and Winry is so amazingly perfect. I loved it! LOVED IT. All the shouting and bickering and awkwardness, haha :) it was utterly hilarious! And beautiful to read, it's rare to find someone who handles them so well. You nailed it. Awesome stuff.
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Extended stay? I can't wait to see what happens during it!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Very nice! :3
Spoot Poot chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
Ok, this has got to keep going! I want more! Both chapters were EXCELLENT! characters were PERFECT! You are really good! More MORE! (I'm a spoilt brat...)
fullmetalpassion chapter 2 . 6/12/2013
I really hope they kiss in d nxt chapter!
fullmetalpassion chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
This is one of d only few stories where Ed and Winry dont seem OOC...great job on keeping their characters straight with all the awkwardness and all!
sanctuaries chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Ahhh, I loved it! Both really were in character. Please update soon
BuggyNess chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Sweet so far! You seemed to switch tense from present to past in the story. Other than that, i enjoyed it.
akanye chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
i promise to review every time u update but i wont if you dont update at lease 3 times a month
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