Reviews for Past After the End
4fireking chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Wow. That. was. different, but. totally. good. I. like. the. premise of it all. Hi. You. might. already. know me. My. name. is. 4fireking. I'm. not. what. you. say. to. be. an. inexperienced. writer. but. I'm. not. an. experienced one either. I wrote 94 stories. Some of them are good while the others...not so good. And I make a lot of mistakes in the writing process. I was wondering if maybe you can review one of my stories that you think is the best. Also, I'm looking for someone to help me come up with ideas for my OC stories. You can look at my profile and pick which one you'd like to work on. Unless you don't like OC stories. That's cool. Not many people on this sight do. But a review to tell me where I went wrong would help. Thank you. I didn't want to PM this to you because it would look like I'm trying to scam you. Besides, people in this sight write better when their stories are ravely reviewed.
author12306 chapter 28 . 10/9/2013
It can't be helped, my mind went on a permanent break when school started. I hope you can get back on here soon. And I hope you can write again soon :D
StillSleepingBy chapter 8 . 9/22/2013
17 at the final train station scene
Guest chapter 27 . 9/17/2013
very good so far! keep up the great work!
LilweenGalatrass chapter 27 . 9/16/2013
I would like the next chapter, it's so interesting ! "

And the video seems quite great as well... :3
Guest chapter 27 . 9/16/2013
Aw man! Cliffhanger!
author12306 chapter 27 . 9/16/2013
Awesome cliffy! Really awesome chapter, you wrote a guide to make a pencil? The most fun we get to do is use knives to shave paint off of a board in art class, really fun. This is such a wonderful story.
jaclynkaileigh chapter 27 . 9/16/2013
Holy crap! Shit just hit the fan! I hope that everyone is alright and maybe this will be an opportunity to bring them closer?
Gwendlynn Rose chapter 27 . 9/16/2013
I don't think we thought you were dead...we new you would update some time lol. :) This story is very interesting. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Looking forward to chapter 28. -G
sofia3 chapter 27 . 9/16/2013
Oh god, Ed please live! PLEASE write faster, cause you left us with a cliffy!
Kin chapter 26 . 9/16/2013
Your chapters ard very short and you take tooo long to uplode them
FullmetalLOL chapter 26 . 9/15/2013
Daww... this story is so cuteā€¹3
author12306 chapter 26 . 9/13/2013
Awesome! And I totally understand, ever since I started school this year (8th grade) I've had, like, five chances to work on my stories! Hm, I had to bite one of my friends last year, they tried to steal my sandwich, and another one I nearly crushed her hand for trying to steal my soda. I slapped another with a book for trying to take my chips, and I spit in my chips once so no one would steal them. I hope school gets easier for you! :) Great chapter, really funny
Gwendlynn Rose chapter 26 . 9/11/2013
Thanks for posting. I can't wait to see where this story is going. -G
fullmetalpassion chapter 26 . 9/11/2013
Glad ur back! Thought u died again...ur author's note was much more interesting than the chapter itself. ..no offense. Anyway...update asap!
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