|Reviews for Best Laid Plans|
| E.Elliot chapter 16 . 8/21
Man I love it!*-* please continue the faster that you can!xD
| d'evilregal chapter 16 . 7/30
I must say I'm in love with this fic xxx please update soon
| ginaaakilljoys chapter 16 . 5/4
This story was not at all what I expected to be but I enjoyed it nonetheless.
| kurotenshi-08 chapter 16 . 3/29
I can't believe I hadn't read this before it's a great story I you decide to finish it.
| hopeless-poet chapter 16 . 2/9
Hopefully you decide to update
You pulled me in too deep
Plus everyone had to of heard how Regina sounded in the end
Somebody has to comment on that an David saw their hands
| SQForEternity chapter 16 . 10/6/2015
I love this story please write some more of it!
| radosna chapter 16 . 10/2/2015
Great story by far, are you going to continue it? Can't wait to read more chapters :)
| emerald-elphie7 chapter 16 . 4/30/2015
keep writing! i love this story!
| Gravity In the Air chapter 16 . 2/19/2015
you seem to get your words mixed up. you mean pail for a bucket. pale is white or the absence of color. accept and except are not the same. but i really like this story so could you update please?
| guest chapter 16 . 1/28/2015
Will you continue this story? It has a great storyline so fare...
| realJane91 chapter 16 . 1/10/2015
Love this story and looking forward to read new chapters.
| EvyTa chapter 16 . 12/14/2014
Please finish this story, I love the way you write, what an imagination! , their first love making was really caring by Emma. I like the fact that neither charming or snow don't give Regina or Emma a hatefull time about the little things they see or suspect about their relashionship keep the good job
| LOCISVU chapter 16 . 12/8/2014
That was an easy way to travel.
| arglebargle chapter 16 . 12/2/2014
ya'll want a review sayin' F dat, well F dat F dat! i liked this chapter cuz it brought back jaaaaack lol! from wat ur sayin its gonna be about 200k words or so, and that would be cool, but i think u could make it to 400k with what ur building so far. I mean, you can still develop tink/hook (if thats gonna be a thing) and rumple/belle (maybe resolve rumples dark one dilemma, belle gets girlnapped, something...) plus u got the storybrooke crew (u could do cannon pairings OR u could mix it up a bit) and i can see at least 2 more arcs of bad guys/action/adventure stuff. something i aint never saw did was to have a timeskip somewheres. like after the initial pairings are in place, 21 jump street it like 3-4 years ahead so we can see young man henry (who could actually help for realz insteads of for playplay) and deal with problems that ARISE CHIKUN even in stable and cemented relationships...or u could jus keep it low and finish to move on to other stuffs. I just think dis story be catback trippin on a uhaul dawg. don't deny it. if u did wanna makes it longerz with more feelz and stuffs just changz the story desc. to include the characters and say its firsts slow burnz SQ den next slow burnz other peeps. never enough OUAT IMO...peace.
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/1/2014
Another great chapter! Regina and Emma are so cute trying to keep their relationship a super secret.