Reviews for Altering Fate
TerribleT chapter 8 . 4/11
Word of God says jinchuriki pregnancies are several months longer than normal, probably a way to retcon some inconsistency (Kishimoto? Retconning? Say it ain't so!)

Anyway, in case you ever get to the point you want to write yourself out of a corner, just remember. It's canon.
colouredthinking chapter 8 . 8/3/2014
Brilliant! I don't know what "The Dark Tower" is about but I formed a rather well thought idea about what it is (assuming it might be a book/novel, right?) but I love this fan-fiction. It was really dark in the beginning and it still is but you said things are going to get happier so... yeah!

I wonder if you'd do something for Naruto like, unseal him and maybe combine him with the baby Kushina has(of course it's him though.) I apologize if you said something in AN's about it but I tend to skip them.

Nevertheless, keep up.
greymouser chapter 8 . 7/17/2014
This chapter has a surreal quality about it. Can't quite believed that Kakashi thought of making Kushina abort her child. I'm sorry but that was not the Kakashi I like from canon or fanon.
happy everyday life chapter 8 . 7/17/2014
I was seriously on edge while reading this chapter. Hoping and hoping that Obito will reach her on time. He didn't, but at least the situation is better compared to the past. I like that Obito is becoming the hero he is supposed to be.

And if Kushina is pregnant, that means Naruto won't be born?
Akamatt chapter 7 . 6/24/2014
I can't wait for more, your style is interesting and edgy.
greymouser chapter 7 . 6/7/2014
Yes! Uchiha Obito finally found his balls and kissed the girl of his dreams. Good for him. :D
Awesome story you have here btw. I like that the hero or anti-hero on this one is Obito. Makes for new, fresh perspectives. I worry about Kakashi, he doesn't have the Sharingan on this one, he'd had trouble surviving the ANBU. By some weird fluke he might die well before his time.
Love Obito's confrontation with the elders, so badass. Next chapter please! :D
Happy chapter 7 . 5/6/2014
Another great chapter! There seems to be some conflict going on within Obito.

I skipped the lemon part because I don't want to see Naruto's parents being lovey dovey. I think when ppl say they want to see lemon, they mean Naruto and Sakura, not his parents!

Anyways, please update your awesome story soon!
Sentinel1995 chapter 7 . 5/6/2014
That was a long delay between updates dude :P This was a nice chapter... The lemon i avoided cause i seriously don't wanna imagine Minato and Kushina going at it. Will there be any JirTsu in this fic ?

update soon
CaptainRiley2 chapter 6 . 4/17/2014
There is one thing that sets your story above other Time Travel and AD fics. It's the fact that you took your time with making sure you explained what happened to make Naruto go back in time, and everything he when through. We now feel the same pain he felt, even when people tell us in flash backs, it doesn't have the same effect. You've done an excellent job with this and I look forward to more of it!

Keep writing!
Anon chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
Finally a readable chapter. The previous ones are pure drivel and should be burned. I'm serious; they don't contribute to any sort of plot and are horribly boring. I kept reading only because the Dark Tower series is so awesome, I needed to see what melding it with ninja might be like.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/15/2014
Nooo Sakura can't be dead!
Brighter Dreams chapter 6 . 1/17/2014
What is Kakashi doing? I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for posting!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/12/2014
I am not sure why preventing the Uchiha massacre would be in any way a big problem - without the Kyuubi attack and the blame on the clan, and the death of the 4th with Hiruzen again taking up to hat (who seems to be unable to stand up against Danzou and fucked up by letting Orochimaru go), and without Tobi helping Itachi, there would be neither a coup nor a massacre to begin with...

Priority should be put on somehow getting the Ame trio into the loop before Akatzuki can ever build up momentum into the wrong direction.
Lonely Athena chapter 6 . 1/9/2014
Awesome. Curious to know how much Kakashi is gonna say to Minato :D.

I love Naruto-Obito talk. :3 cool!
Dorcyy chapter 6 . 1/9/2014
I've got mixed feelings about this story. For once, your wrining stile is really my likes. You're using intense words and expressions. :) Even if this fic is too gruesome and cruel for my preferencies, I still like it in some ways. I also approve your many link with The Dark Tower series and choosing Flagg as an antagonist was a good choice. Much better then pulling out an overpowered OC. Keep up the work.
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