|Reviews for Why Me?|
| xxxrae97xxx chapter 11 . 8/9
Holy shit, I can't believed this hasn't updated. This isn't a fickle self-insert or some bullshit. This has actual potential of becoming incredibly good and fun! Please keep up with this project I beg of you!
| kewllewk chapter 6 . 6/12
For some strange reason, competent villains are one of my least favorite things in fanfiction. No problems with writers who use them, or most original stories that do, but for some reason just the hint at there being someone that's truly capable of opposing the main character is nearly enough to stop me from reading a fanfic. It's generally not even a problem if they randomly pop up halfway through, only when we see those glimpses into what's going on with them, or hints at their identity and powers, long before they become truly relevant themselves beyond their general impact. I don't even like that I don't like them, but it still makes me want to go do something else almost every time. I'd much rather a random and completely odd event just happen with no explanation and leave me guessing until you get to an actual introduction for the villain.
| Tsamoka chapter 11 . 5/30
I think it's safe to say that Alex/Iskandar definitely knows that something is wrong now. And I guessing that the female causing all the trouble is his ex? Man, talk about a ex from hell.
| Cpt.Rabbit chapter 11 . 5/24
This. . . Well, lets say I hadn't expected to like this as much as I did. I had initially been worried that, frankly, Alex would wind up becoming a Gary Stu, which though fun to read if written well, isn't the easiest thing to make interesting.
You've dispelled my worries in more ways than one. You've both proven your ability to write a character with. . . Slightly higher than average capabilities, (Heh) as well as proven that in comparison to the enemies he'll be facing he's not really too over powered.
I'm only hoping that the next "Avatars" he has don't mess with the balance too much. With only the Rider Avatar he's pretty much strong enough to take out any of the vanilla antagonists with no trouble, so the balance of the story will rely on your ability to believably empower them and any new enemies you put in.
Still, I think that you're capable of that, so I'm quite anxiously going to be waiting for the next chapter. Have a nice day, and good work writing this up.
| Lost chapter 6 . 5/12
And she killed my interest, I was honestly hoping and expexting something clever from you not give frodo a lightsaber and Sauron a death star. The honesr fact of the matter is that alex lacks the stomach to really use his power in a war. The windstone crisis is not something easily solved and hes smarter then saito Alex won't take someone elses word blindly that he was doing the right thing killing an army from ALbion that cast down a tyrant king, killing the elves for there land or just fighting a plain old war for his summoner for the sake of national interest just wouldn't sit well with him and yet he lacks power to effect change with violence on people who don't deserve it and no real guarantee that it will improve things.
| Soleimon Berserker chapter 11 . 3/12
Im unaware if you've played the Dark/Demon Souls series but if so then id like tk recommend Artorias the Abysswalker, Dragonslayer Ornstein, The Perpetrator, and the Ivory King from this series. Tai your pick, But out of those Ornstein personally holds a little place in my heart...so many deaths T-T
| LaUgHiNgmaN chapter 11 . 3/11
Well I read up to chapter 11 and I can say it's interesting. The villainess is she one of Alex's exes? Because I'm guessing she's the recent went-not-so-well break up since she's acting as if she went over the deep end and completely mental. That and there was indication of using "him" when addressing that she watch Familiar of Zero with somebody.
You adding the Chaos Marines even if primitive is seemingly overpowering the antagonist because the first two champions were her first meaning so that means later on when she gets the hang of it she could make a damn Chaos Marine army that even with the combination of multiple armies uniting against this Chaos Marines, they, the normal armies, would be slaughter.
I'm not saying it bad but I'm saying if this comes to pass, which probably will lead to such, will require Alex to have more than just Avatars to temporarily change into. It would require him to have an ULTIMATE Noble Phantasm like Ionioi Hetairoi to reduce the threat to a managable battle for regular armies be able to fight with assistance from Noble Phantasm soldiers.
I'm not saying to not give the villainess a super power/genetically augmentated army. I'm saying if you choose to give her an such army even a small one, which still probably can tear apart a normal size army of regular soldiers even with mages in the ranks, you have to even the playing field and give Alex a Noble Phantasm to nullify the army number aspect. He can grow to be a warrior but the number of chaos marines will still be effective against a well season warrior it will only be matter of time it takes for the person to fall even if that person has some sort of power up. Besides you even gave the first two champions incredible armors that is mostly magic resistant would probably means there is more where that came from, most likely from the villainess. So to be fair for the protagonist, he's going to need a Noble Phantasm army, he could use the Gordius Wheel, a anti-army Noble Phantasm, but once he used it the antagonists can try to plan accordingly on how to deal with it, a army on the other hand will be hard to deal with since the tide of battle will be a struggle as it is constantly changing.
I hope to see more good things about this fanfic.
| moonberserker chapter 11 . 3/6
Just marathoner this after reading your new story in space battles/sufficient velocity (don't remember which one) and I gotta say that I loved this.
| Dairegh chapter 11 . 2/3
Cool beans. I've only ever once faught a Tyrant, and it was a bitch and a half to kill. And I had a -lot- of rockets with me. With Alex now having access to an advanced form of tyrant, the Nemesis, shit just got real. :3
| Dairegh chapter 1 . 2/2
*blink blink*. What the hell was with that book? O.o
Oookay. So, ZnT-verse. He seems to have all the effects of Iskander, King of Conquerors... Introduced himself as such, too. I kinda wonder, did he maybe not get the Gandalfr runes like he thought he would? Hm.
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/25/2014
I feel that Gamerxz's Black Knight Chronicles on SufficientVelocity is pretty similar to this. I hope reading it can help you overcome your writer's block and get back into the mood to continue this or that other tantalizing and mysterious fic you've got listed on your profile page.
| EnigmaWriter21 chapter 11 . 12/14/2014
I liked this story until this chapter, this is a great story and I will continue to read it to see where you take it... but 'Nemesis Beta'. Really Dude? Really? lol
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/12/2014
How about Edward Newgate AKA:Whitebeard as a form
| Anonymous chapter 11 . 12/7/2014
How about Veradux from game Sonny as avatar? You know the RPG Flash game hosted on Armor Games.
| Aeonir chapter 8 . 12/2/2014
In my opinion anytime an author uses 40k in a crossover it forever poisons that fic. 40k is such an insane, dark, expansive and overpowered setting it's extremely hard to strike a balance and it's also hard to make something fucked up like Chaos cults entertaining to read about instead of just revolting and out of place.