Reviews for Why Me?
kabir0399 chapter 12 . 6/30
I really love it
Maybe the DBZ characters would b less OP if hi li reserves were the same amount as his prana reserves? So he might be able to fly and be stronged an faster, but he wouldn't be anywhere close to planet breaking levels, maybe more like mountain-breaking levels, and that's if he has plenty of reserves, and has time to build up his attack
kabir0399 chapter 4 . 6/29
Quite good
kabir0399 chapter 1 . 6/29
interesting, I hope rhis proves to be as good as your other fic
Grim24 chapter 7 . 6/23
Well that was disappointing if all the action in your story will be always like that well i might as well skip it iskander come to weak to borderline pathetic im not gonna include the fight with guiche which doesn't have action if this continue i might halt reading this and just save it for now in case i want to continue...
Golden Ryuu Bijuu King chapter 8 . 6/19
seems like this girl never read anime with multiple universes and crapp like Zelretch or the Dimension Witch from xxxHolic... It's kinda sad to see someone given a little bit of power and then deciding to do whatever they want to whomever they want... even if they're "fictional"


In any case, getting me this disappointed in an, ironically enough, fictional character just shows how much I'm being immersed in this story so good job!
Golden Ryuu Bijuu King chapter 7 . 6/19
oh my... that second the last sentence

she's racist! or would it be anime-ist?

Cool battle! Nice to see Alex not OP-ing his way through it and that he actually had to fight for it.
Hercules8 chapter 3 . 5/4
I am serious loving this story! It just so amazing; the plot, the characters, and the content are so well done that they mix into an amazing story!

I hope you will continue this story. It just too awesome to be left alone! :3
Hercules8 chapter 1 . 5/4
Wow, this a really interesting you got here! I especially like your Original Character Alex, he seems really cool. :D
Rangle chapter 2 . 4/8
I'm sure an experienced fanfiction writer such as yourself already know that powerful character doesn't necessarily mean Gary Stu or Mary Sue. I'm also relatively positive that your fans from past work know that you'll do good with the characterization. What worries me more is that you ramp up the difficulty level to utter craziness. I shall read more to see whether that will happen or not.
Rangle chapter 1 . 4/8
Man, I wish it was Iskander that got summoned. The guy is awesome. Anyway, I hope you don't escalate the conflict too much by trying not to make your MC as a gary-stu.
Oblitus-Umbrae chapter 12 . 3/26
Dio Brando or Jotaro Kujo. Hell any main chwracte from jjba woukd fit as an avatar.
BraveVesperia chapter 1 . 3/5
interesting start, glad he is taking no shit from Louise. The setting for familiar of zero is interesting its just that Louise was such a pill in cannon that it put me off. hopefully some sense is slapped into her here.
Zero testarossa chapter 12 . 2/26
your spelling Osmond's name wrong
Lok chapter 9 . 1/22
earlier it is said that he has a sonic screwdriver, the healer could be the doctor, though id advise having it split personality, in one compartmentalized portion he still maintains his human way of thinking but another portion of his mind thinks as the doctor would, like if he were a regeneration of the doctor, same soul/core different man like when each new doctor appears.
FiveStarFinish chapter 12 . 12/31/2015
Very well written, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more in the future. However, it's annoying that the other Void familiar seems to be nowhere near as limited as Alex, and that Alex continuously dances around the possibility of another familiar being from his world without ever addressing it properly. But honestly, if my only two gripes are things that could possibly be explained away with believable future developments, that says A LOT about the excellent quality of this story.
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