Do you ever plan on continuing this? It's honestly one of the best I've ever encountered, and it'd be really disappointing if you dropped it

Uncharacteristic for him to say "mom", that's what a suburban kid says. "Mother" would have been more fitting.

You leave alot of loose ends wasn't Videl Pregnant with Gohan Second Child.

Not trying to throw shade but you need to be a bit more realistic on the Consequences of Gohan Past Lifestyle... Saying that the Every women That Gohan Slept with or Raped Is unable to bear his children is completely absurd and Lazy Cop out

Realistically, he should have children that he's not aware of but you could simply say they're not important to The Story And everybody would be fine with it.

As a writer myself (I only write on AO3) and someone that has been with TLR since the first chapter I find it odd I don't think I've ever reviewed this story. I remember when I was in high school and a new chapter of this was posted I got excited every time I got the email. I decided to reread this after a long time because I'd fallen off over the years. I love this story and in a lot of ways it reminds me of my young adult years because of how much I enjoyed it at that time.

The things I enjoyed were the world building, the way you captured a lot of the characters, the emotions. I liked that you didn't make Gohan immune to all of his mistakes simply because bad things happened to him and his destiny blah blah. I liked that you write some of the best fight scenes on the entire website. Seriously some of this should have been a comic.

Now the things I didn't like were Gohan's relationships. I kept along for the ride in hopes that he would finally sit down with his mom and videl and just talk about everything at some point. I never felt like as a reader Videl got real closure on Gohan and got to understand him. Not saying that would absolve him of anything, but at this point I don't even think she realizes he's half human yet. It's also hard to think about how long Chi Chi and Goku have gone without really anything on Pan. So those were somethings as a reader I guess I hoped for was for Gohan and Videl to reach an understanding with each other and hash out their trauma and co-parent as best they could.

I'm not sure if you plan to finish this or even how far you plan to take the story. I hope that everyone gets the closure that they need. I feel like the way this is written is that Gohan won't be around much longer and that he's going to die and go into oblivion or become some sort of God, or something like Goku at the end of GT. I don't expect a "happy" ending for Gohan though I wish on some level that he could make the best of the decisions he's made and like Vegeta live a better life.

Hey there! I hope you're doing great!

I just finished reading your story The Long Road, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to adapt it into my comic style or even animation. I'd work on it as a commission, and I think you'd really enjoy the final result something you might even want to share!

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Hi. Just a check-up here. How are you doing now? You career with youtube? Hope everything is working out well to you.

your obsession with chapter length is misguided imo. loved this chapter. get fucked taro

absolutely love the ideas in this story, but i have a really hard time not tuning out and skimming when the fights get this long.

still this was my favorite saga yet. Taro was a very cool idea!

love this but these fights need trimmed more they are slogs

You have a real talent. Idk if im being dramatic but that chapter ending actually got me crying

Please continue

This was a great story, buddy. Good luck wherever you are.

Toriyama Has Just Passed Away. RIP

Your narrative mastery of conveying PTSD is IMPRESSIVE, not least in the last few chapters.

(Your belongs to you. You're you are. -You mostly reverse those.)

Thanks. You've done a man's job, sir. Can't wait for the rest of the story.

Really love this story and have been a fan for years ! Hope you are still plugging away at this in your free time :)