Reviews for The Long Road
tomorrow4eva chapter 8 . 10/2/2013
Yeah I think that night with Videl will come back to bite. He is too used to no consequences. Hehe, Goten thinks he's lucky to fight Vegeta
tomorrow4eva chapter 6 . 10/1/2013
I love your reply to another comment on Earth being abnormal. You're right: sweet, pretty little planet, band of insanely powerful protectors(inc 2 endangered species), living the simple life with magic beans and a wish dragon. Remember Supreme Kai's shock? its fantastic and crazy. It's nice to see that through Gohan's eyes
tomorrow4eva chapter 5 . 10/1/2013
Well, if he had killed Gohan this would be a short story. So, good he lived, bad he's even more dangerous.
DarkVoid116 chapter 15 . 10/1/2013
This was an intriguing chapter.

I'm curious to see how Turles and Gohan handle the situation. Is Goku strong enough to take down Turles in a one-on-one fight? Is Turles seriously stronger than a Super Saiyan 2?

This /is/ listed as eventually bringing Videl back into it, and I doubt you'd discard Chi Chi or Goku, so obviously something is going to go down here. I kinda expect Gohan to half-heartedly have doubts about what he's doing with Turles.

Piccolo and Gohan's mentor-student 'friendship' might affect Gohan's judgment and allow him to assist Piccolo. Vegeta might be as good as dead though.

The time in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber for Gohan and Kakarot opened some doors for the story to continue. Gohan actually beginning to heed Kakarot's advice concerning calming his self surprised me.

Great chapter!
tomorrow4eva chapter 4 . 10/1/2013
I think your right. I think Chi-chi would be more worried about making sure Gohan knows he's loved then her old dreams. For now. I am totally looking forward to Goten.
tomorrow4eva chapter 3 . 10/1/2013
Nicely done. I think Gohan's reaction is realistic. Run. Run away.
tomorrow4eva chapter 2 . 10/1/2013
Yeah, I like how you're focusing on the family here. That that is the point, rather than going straight into the child abuse. Enjoying the story so far.
dbzfan001 chapter 15 . 9/30/2013
great chapter i wil wait patiently for the next
Guest chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
NOOooo! Gohan! Great work, I think the next chapter will be fine as one large piece. Keep up the great work!
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 14 . 9/29/2013
It's hilarious how Gohan treats Dende.
XXXpossessedforlifeXXX chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
This story...is easily one of the best stories I've ever read. ...No. It's even more than that. Words cannot explain how amazing, how fantastic, how magnificent, how superb, and how AWESOMELY AWESOME this story is.
ergfvew chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
WTF HOW COULD THIS BE SO AWESOME!?
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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
low on inspiration chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
Yikes, I don't know what I was expecting with Goku and Gohan going to confront Turles but I didn't expect that! I'm curious to see how Gohan will react to Turles' plans for Earth. Excited to see how this all plays out!

As for the next chapter, I do enjoy reading long chapters so it wouldn't bother me if you posted the entire thing. Though I suppose I would say break the chapter into two, if that would cut wait time for the following chapter, if that makes sense?
Ky111 chapter 15 . 9/29/2013
Awesome turn of events I wonder how things will go now will Gohan leave with Turles perhaps sparing Earth or will Goku surprise them some how or the other Z-fighters turn up and revive him. Looking forward to finding out.

Until the next one.
Proman1398 chapter 15 . 9/28/2013
Great chapter again, good twists and it's even named so well
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