Reviews for Sacrifice
Trigger Fingers chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
If you listen closely, you can hear the sound of my heart shattering. Although it made me ache, this was an excellent alternative take on the ending of the reboot. I look forward to reading more material from you!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Oh wow, very sad but very well written. I like it alot, and would definitely love to see more from you.
Celefin chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Wow... now I feel seriously bad for writing Royal Affection.
This one actually hurts. Very well done.

Well, your writing technique is pretty good.
Most important thing for a longer story is to get yourself a Beta. It can be difficult to spot mistakes in spelling or tenses (there are very few in this one but they tend to accumulate in late night writing sessions) and inconsistencies in your plot or character development on your own. The longer the story, the more important the beta. You might also want to try drawing up a plot map beforehand so you know where you are going and don't write yourself into a corner.

Good luck,
-Cel
viento chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
im so sad! Its a very good fic i like all the details you put in it but please write a new one with a happy ending... Poor lara T_T