Reviews for Struggling for Breath
treblecleft99 chapter 4 . 7/19
I really liked this story! Please, please, please, though, work on using the right forms of words like there their and they're, your and you're, and were and we're. It makes it more fun to read.
RingwraithYJLOVER chapter 4 . 5/11
I would love it if you did a retell of Into Darkness. Great job with this!
Halogien chapter 4 . 3/15
In response to the question at the end, I am all for it!
Mystery Girl chapter 4 . 9/15/2015
I really like this story a lot. I think you should do into darkness female kirk. I would totally read the story. Please write
Nataly SkyPot chapter 4 . 9/11/2015
Muy bueno.
samanthatm chapter 4 . 2/14/2015
Awesome.
sami1010220 chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
Aw, i loved it!
Vulcanlover12 chapter 4 . 3/6/2014
MOAR NOW!
livelovepeacelaugh chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
I love it! One question though, why was that one guy so shady, ya know, avoiding eye contact after the leader of the rebels got taken down? Was he the spy? Sorry I can't quite remember his name, and I'm commenting on chapter four... Anyway, I love it! Thanks for writing!
katniss12 chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
i like that idea
WaitingToGraduate chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
You should totally write a sequel (: hehe.. Or write In to Darkness with fem Kirk and have Spock and Kirk together in the end.. Xxx
Vulcanlover12 chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
I love it! Maybe write a sequel?
Guest chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
Really enjoyed this and the way you presented the characters. Hope you consider doing more of it. Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
This was SO awesome
Rookie Cookie Baked Crispy chapter 3 . 9/23/2013
God, I loved this! Great job with McCoy!
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