Reviews for Struggling for Breath
samanthatm chapter 4 . 2/14
Awesome.
sami1010220 chapter 4 . 6/7/2014
Aw, i loved it!
Vulcanlover12 chapter 4 . 3/6/2014
MOAR NOW!
livelovepeacelaugh chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
I love it! One question though, why was that one guy so shady, ya know, avoiding eye contact after the leader of the rebels got taken down? Was he the spy? Sorry I can't quite remember his name, and I'm commenting on chapter four... Anyway, I love it! Thanks for writing!
katniss12 chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
i like that idea
WaitingToGraduate chapter 4 . 3/5/2014
You should totally write a sequel (: hehe.. Or write In to Darkness with fem Kirk and have Spock and Kirk together in the end.. Xxx
Vulcanlover12 chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
I love it! Maybe write a sequel?
Guest chapter 3 . 12/17/2013
Really enjoyed this and the way you presented the characters. Hope you consider doing more of it. Thank you for sharing.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/22/2013
This was SO awesome
Rookie Cookie Baked Crispy chapter 3 . 9/23/2013
God, I loved this! Great job with McCoy!
Coughkirkcough chapter 2 . 9/9/2013
Am I the only one who imagined alien bodies flying through the air as Kirk kicked ass? Cause if I was... I dunno what happens if I was...
Doctor Frostybuscus chapter 3 . 8/21/2013
Haha oh my God, Bones! He never stops freaking amusing me!
gonekrazy3000 chapter 3 . 7/19/2013
More please :D
I LOVED this story. Please could we have more ?
MSU82 chapter 3 . 7/10/2013
This is absolutely an amazing story! I loved the entire thing! Do more? :)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
1. Alpha
2. I fairly certian that the Star Trek show/movies are based of the naval system which means admirals not generals.
I apologize if those were intentional. If they were I would appreciate it if you could add an authors note, otherwise it is confusing.
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