Reviews for Lola's suprise
megbacon chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Someone has a bun in the oven
MidnightMaddi chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
Well then w
sunshineg9 chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Wow

:O
The Lord Writer chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Oops, sorry bout that. You just have to take time when you are writing and you'll do much better.
JustSpirky chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Oh wow..:this is a very different writing style. Bug and Lola are really in character. But you should try taking it a bit slower. I once really sucked at writing but after I learned to take my time with it and add detail, I really improved. You have great potential for being a writer, you just have to take some time when r
Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2013
OMGOSH. You suck.
Luminous107 chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
You delivered the right twist ending, I cant stop laughing!