Reviews for Ultimatum
Mandi M chapter 14 . 11/9
Please update
MargaritaS chapter 14 . 10/26
interesting, i hope you continue soon :)
TheFlowerOfTheCourt chapter 2 . 10/17
If Harry can apparate, why not just...apparate away? It would have taken him all of 10 seconds to apparate with Tony and then come back for Yinsen. Huge plot hole there.
Boarador chapter 14 . 10/15
just when it was getting awesome it cliff hangs
Millie chapter 4 . 9/6
Neville was heir to an old family and fortune. Why is he running a bar, with his wife as a barmaid? What happened to herbology? A reconciliation with Hermione is okay, but please no romance.
Millie chapter 2 . 9/6
Huh? Harry left London without his wand? Sorry, a wizard's wand is his right hand. No way is it left behind. Then he is able to do wandless magic? Lots of plot holes
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6
Is Harry going to be an idiot in this fiction? NO one with any common sense walks out into the desert without water! He is in need of water, but lets a convoy go by without trying to stop it? This is a country at war, and he is out wandering around? Only one chapter down, hopefully this improves.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6
Aren't there any unpartnered people in your AU? Why must everyone be paired off so young? How about waiting till 20's-30s? Interesting start.
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 14 . 8/19
A very interesting story so far! I'm going to watch out for more!
Guest chapter 8 . 8/17
Minor grammar mistakes here and there. Also isn't it a little unrealistic that people accept the whole magic thing so easily? It feels like Harry's showboating.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/2
continua please me encanta la historia
draco7347 chapter 14 . 6/28
love story cant wait for brand new chapters
tanithlipsky chapter 14 . 6/12
Steve needs a slap to his face.
drkprince chapter 1 . 6/4
a nice read. .lvd d stry..do update if u can..thnk u fr sch a good read..
drkprince chapter 2 . 6/4
leaving his wand behind seriously? ? mmm..i have jst gud odr dan d wand bit..lmao..srry
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