|Reviews for Gah! Troublesome Children! Rewritten!|
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/8/2014
Please make more soon!:3 :D
| Kyprioth chapter 2 . 2/20/2014
Damn you used to have more of this posted. I wish you kept the original up too because it was Kawaiiii!
Thanks for the treat,
May the muses favor you,
| Sabaku No Shiaki chapter 2 . 7/25/2013
Oh my oh my oh my oh my!
There's going to be a lot of troublesome things prepared for Shika!
There's some error here and there like : 'hear' which should be 'here' and 'of' which should be 'if' but other than that, i didn't notice anything. Lol
i love your story! But i think you should slow it down a little more.
you did a great job! please update soon! :D
| Sabaku No Shiaki chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
One word . . Sweet! So lovely! poor child.
One thing i need to say, can you make different paragraph for each conversation? the way it is now is kinda confusing and make it hard to read. it's only a suggestion.
| CallMeEli chapter 2 . 7/8/2013
I actually half- forgot how this story went so this re-written one sounds new, which is a good thing. The story is pretty good so far.
Update soon. (:
| Kapil358 chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Nice story update soon
| minnahime chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
Awesome! I like it x))
Update soon :)
| Jitterbug chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
More more more!
I love it!
Okay I love shikamaru in this.
Think you captured him perfectly actually...
| Lost in My Sapphire Eyes chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
d'awww... I sense an adoption, don't i? ;) I wonder how Temari will take this... :) update soon!