|Reviews for The Parent Trap|
| bob bobbyson chapter 14 . 10/7
I was joking, my name isn't bob. (I'm not telling you what it is though)
I like how you used parts of the movie in the beginning and slowly drifted off by yourself. Only suggestion I have is with grammar and punctuation. :D
ALSO SOMETHING YOU MIGHT WANT TO HEAR THAT IS EQUALLY GOOD AND BAD
MAYBE MORE GOOD OR MORE BAD IDK
OKAY SO CANON-LY SPAIN PROPOSED TO ROMANO AND ROMANO SAID SOMETHING ALONG THE LINES OF (I KINDA FORGOT IN THE WHOLE GIST OF THIS) 3 MEALS A DAY AND NAPS AND HE WOULD BUT APPARENTLY SPAIN TOOK THAT AS A REJECTION AND WAS SAD FK THIS GOTTVERDAMMT
| Dolphin24 chapter 11 . 10/3
Lol! This is so funny! I love Toni's reply to her! XD I don't normally read yaoi or yuri but this sounded much too interesting to not read. Now I'm glad I clicked into it, this is hilarious, and some parts are just plain adorable!
| Allie chapter 11 . 9/4
Cool story, but PLEASE remember the difference between there/their/they're and know/now. I'm kind of a grammar Nazi and that kinda stuff bugs me. LOVE the story though!
| TheGodOfWeirdness chapter 4 . 8/18
That's a day before my b-day!
| Angel999FTW chapter 14 . 8/11
I FrUKing loved it! And I also like the movie too. It was perfect!
| bleachfreak13 chapter 14 . 8/11
So freaking cute and amazing! I loved it! I love the Face family! Amazing story thank you so much for writing ir
| Demigod Witch chapter 14 . 7/19
Wow... This book (or story) was AWESOME!
| Argentum Tantibus chapter 7 . 6/7
"I'm sorry I couldn't spend more time with you" should be:
"Je suis désolé de ne pas avoir put passer plus de temps avec toi."
The pronoun 'vous' is only used to indicate multiple people or great respect for a single person.
Nice story, I really pity poor Canada. Having to eat so many hamburgers...
| fullofcrazyness chapter 14 . 5/14
DAWWWWWW SO CUTE I LOVED IT!
| 1000meredith chapter 14 . 3/15
This was the best story ever
I enjoyed it very much :)
| NaddEchaos chapter 14 . 3/15
I loved this story! It was super funny and enjoyable to read. I don't ship FRUK but the story was so awesome and well written that I didn't mind at all. AWESOME work! This should be Prussia approved!
| andIJDC chapter 3 . 11/30/2014
Well so far the story has been following the movie pretty closely but there are little things here and there that keep it interesting like Mathew's interactions with Gilbert and Carlos. My favorite part this chapter was the fear of Ivan and his scarf XD
It makes me sigh a little though knowing France and England won't even be meeting till much later, but it's a fun and easy read so on I shall continue
| penthestory chapter 14 . 11/22/2014
this was the cutest, most sappy thing ive read in a while! you did an amazing job at staying in character while still making it a fluffy ball of awesome fanfic : thank you so much for writing (and finishing) this!
| kazune1988 chapter 6 . 10/19/2014
Poor Matthew, having to stuff all that food now. Not to mention, no maple syrup! So much fluff from both America and Canada.
| iluvfandoms1 chapter 14 . 9/15/2014