Reviews for Burden of the Sky
Kim chapter 19 . 1/10
Where is bianca ? Is she dead or captured? It wasn't clear . The chapter said one shall be captured in the land with out rain
Guest chapter 19 . 1/3
Hey, what about Bianca?
Apollo is boss chapter 19 . 12/10/2016
i don't know if you've released, but this chapter is a repeat of the last one
SpencerDorman chapter 19 . 10/2/2016
This last chapter is nearly the exact same as the previous chapter, bar a few different words. If you had wanted to change it, you could have just edited the chapter.
SpencerDorman chapter 14 . 10/2/2016
So, did Percy control the water in his blood to stop the blood flow and seal the wound, or did he use his powers from Hestia to heal the wound? Or did he do both?
SpencerDorman chapter 13 . 10/2/2016
You realize, that with Poseidon's control over water, that would potentially extend to the other forms of water as well, right? The way this works in my mind is that Percy already has control over water from Poseidon, and with enough practice he would have control over ice, snow, and vapor as well. Now, since he has the powers of Khione through his adoption, his affinity for ice and snow control would be as great, if not greater than his control over water, since his control over ice would come from two different sources, even if one isn't as natural as the other. With Khione's powers over the wind (that she inherited from Boreas) that Percy has been given, even if they are minor, they would aid in his control over vapor that he would get through his connection to Poseidon. And if he just had trouble turning the water into vapor, since that would the stage of water that he has the most trouble with, he could use his powers from Hestia to vaporize the water, and then control the vapor from there with the powers that he has inherited from both Khione and Poseidon in union with one another.
SpencerDorman chapter 12 . 10/2/2016
Medusa is the only of her gorgon sisters that has a petrifying gaze. Stheeno and Euriyale (I think thats their names) cannot turn people to stone.

Also, I thought Percy did have access to fire? He has the blessing of Hestia, whose fire has the ability to both heal and harm. People just don't usually acknowledge her ability to hurt people (even if she is one of, if not the most powerful deity of Olympus) because she is so peaceful, and chooses not to.
NeverGoingOutTitus chapter 19 . 8/30/2016
Why did you repeat the chapter?
MetaPenguin chapter 19 . 8/5/2016
You left the end unresolved. That's all I'm gonna say.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2016
Great prophecy writing
Guest chapter 18 . 7/1/2016
whoa copy chapter why!
kitongu chapter 13 . 3/27/2016
Great story
Helper chapter 8 . 2/17/2016
Automatons are the robots that work for Hephaestus.
Automobiles are cars, trucks, and vans.
Just thought you'd like to know.
NataliePriorChaseJackson chapter 2 . 1/24/2016
Wow... So A-mazing... ;)
Guest chapter 19 . 8/16/2015
Repeat if last?
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