Reviews for To Break Thy Chains and Cycles
thatcher577 chapter 8 . 6/6/2024
I thank you for the chapter.
thatcher577 chapter 4 . 6/6/2024
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thatcher577 chapter 4 . 6/6/2024
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thatcher577 chapter 3 . 6/6/2024
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thatcher577 chapter 2 . 6/6/2024
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thatcher577 chapter 1 . 6/6/2024
I thank you for the chapter.
Guest chapter 9 . 3/13/2024
too bad bro it was real interesting read

would been interesting to see some more magitech and how magic or force powers progressed with harry as emperor since i dont think hed want stagnation in his empire

maybe sacrifice a whole lot of enemies to make a philosophers stone like FMA or something
Shadeymankey chapter 3 . 2/18/2024
Star wars and 40k should have thousands/millions of ships due to constantly building them and war. 200 years is not long enough to have THAT many, but there should be low thousands for sure and more being expanded. Maybe notes about humans being encouraged to have children in this new empire so their forces expand rapidly would have been good.
EdTheBeast chapter 9 . 2/15/2024
Huh! Oh Well, thought this was complete, not abandoned!
sumanth jain chapter 9 . 10/17/2023
Thanks for summary ending. Hope you continue when u can. I enjoyed the story
Darknessdawns chapter 1 . 12/7/2022
Even though this story is abandoned I still have it a shot but was lost within the first chapter. The summary leads one to believe this would start with Harry stepping back through the veil. However it does not and starts long after his empire is obviously established, a pity that. At any rate it was an interesting concept and I read the story notes at the end to see where your ideas went.
Clavyus chapter 9 . 10/9/2022
Pity. It was fun.
badlyAuthor chapter 9 . 5/28/2022
Imagine being this brain dead.
HughJasz chapter 4 . 12/31/2021
quote: "How he loved his little sister, as long as she and Fleur were around, he knew everything would be alright."

The death flags are off the charts on this one. Please don't start killing off characters lol
Officer Dibble chapter 9 . 8/25/2021
It's a shame that you couldn't continue this story, reading your idea's for where you wanted it to go were interesting and would have been fun to read. A shame.
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