Reviews for To Break Thy Chains and Cycles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I thank you for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thank you for the chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thank you for the chapter. |
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![]() ![]() too bad bro it was real interesting read would been interesting to see some more magitech and how magic or force powers progressed with harry as emperor since i dont think hed want stagnation in his empire maybe sacrifice a whole lot of enemies to make a philosophers stone like FMA or something |
![]() ![]() ![]() Star wars and 40k should have thousands/millions of ships due to constantly building them and war. 200 years is not long enough to have THAT many, but there should be low thousands for sure and more being expanded. Maybe notes about humans being encouraged to have children in this new empire so their forces expand rapidly would have been good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh! Oh Well, thought this was complete, not abandoned! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for summary ending. Hope you continue when u can. I enjoyed the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though this story is abandoned I still have it a shot but was lost within the first chapter. The summary leads one to believe this would start with Harry stepping back through the veil. However it does not and starts long after his empire is obviously established, a pity that. At any rate it was an interesting concept and I read the story notes at the end to see where your ideas went. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pity. It was fun. |
![]() ![]() Imagine being this brain dead. |
![]() ![]() ![]() quote: "How he loved his little sister, as long as she and Fleur were around, he knew everything would be alright." The death flags are off the charts on this one. Please don't start killing off characters lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a shame that you couldn't continue this story, reading your idea's for where you wanted it to go were interesting and would have been fun to read. A shame. |