Reviews for Family
Dani9513 chapter 10 . 8/2/2013
Love Carol and Jim :)
Tetsu-sama chapter 10 . 8/2/2013
Liked this chapter a lot!
Summer of '69 chapter 9 . 8/1/2013
Aww! They are a family. Not by blood, but by bond. Framily is a word that my family uses to describe friends so close that they're like family and I think it fits them perfectly.
Jenna of the Red Robes chapter 9 . 7/30/2013
Good chapter! I liked it :)
Tetsu-sama chapter 8 . 7/17/2013
Happy to see the chapter!
serena-jean chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
Great chapter, I can't believe I just found this story, very excited to keep reading, characters are on par
stars90 chapter 7 . 7/9/2013
I enjoyed this chapter. Those two have a very interesting relationship.
Kotay chapter 6 . 7/2/2013
Good work! keep writing!
GraysonSteele chapter 6 . 7/1/2013
Very nice. I think it's my favorite after the initial chapter. Of course, I happen to be a big fan of the pairing of Spock and Uhura.
GraysonSteele chapter 5 . 6/26/2013
Definitely back on your game with this chapter. You said it yourself that you weren't comfortable with Chekov's voice, but you obviously don't have that issue with Sulu. I like the relationship tone you've set for Kirk & Sulu. I think Hikaru is a good choice for helping Jim to regain confidence and swagger. Hikaru is a contemporary with enough self-confidence not to be put off by Kirk's meteoric rise and reputation as well as intelligence to be a valuable sounding board. As always, I enjoy reading your work.

**Anything new in CA forthcoming?**
michelle-csp chapter 5 . 6/25/2013
Excellent bonding moment between Kirk and Sulu.
Jenna of the Red Robes chapter 5 . 6/25/2013
Great chapter :) I really liked it!
seacat03 chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
I think you did a good job with Chekov' s voice.
royalpinkdogs chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
wonderful story, and this chapter is truly fine!
FeraFulmina chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
I like this book so far! And as for Mr. Chekov's accent, just substitute w for v and v for w, and it'll be basic, but accurate.
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