|Reviews for Falling Apart - A SYOT|
| charliesunshine chapter 3 . 9/12/2013
That was really good, I liked emero but I have a suggestion to make the story easier to read, either have both tributes from each district in a chapter or put the tributes in order of their district or label the chapters but yeah that was a really good chapter and update again soon
| charliesunshine chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
I really liked Rubie as she was not your average district 1 tribute, she seems strong and I donèt really know if she would be a typical career or not, update again soon
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I have an Oc for you.
Name: Oblivian Chetarin
Appearance: Dirty Blond hair, one light grey eye and the other icy blue, and Fair skin
Personality: Thoughtful, Brave, Sneaky, Intellectual, and Firey tempered
Family: Drake Chetarin(Father), Leahia Chetarin(Mother), Blaze Chetarin (brother)
Friends: Blaze Flames, Frost Moons
History: She comes from a vary Rich family. She has always be good with fixing difrent types of tech.
Abilities: Vary good at detecting traps. Good climber.
Weakness's: Falls down to much. she always does what she's told even it's at her own demise.
Best weapon: Bow, Staff, or sharp rock.
Strategy: Sneaks up on people then hits them over the head, or shots them from afar.
Token: Icy blue Robin Feather.
Preferable Death: Cracked neck from falling or Being shot in the chest.
Reaping: Her best friend -Frost Moons- was chosen so she volunteered to take her place.
Chariot: A silvery grey metallic grey chariot. With Gear wheels.
| charliesunshine chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
that was really good, I kinda liked George, update again soon