Reviews for Falling Apart - A SYOT
charliesunshine chapter 3 . 9/12/2013
That was really good, I liked emero but I have a suggestion to make the story easier to read, either have both tributes from each district in a chapter or put the tributes in order of their district or label the chapters but yeah that was a really good chapter and update again soon
charliesunshine chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
I really liked Rubie as she was not your average district 1 tribute, she seems strong and I donèt really know if she would be a typical career or not, update again soon
Guest chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I have an Oc for you.
Name: Oblivian Chetarin

Age: 15

District: 5

Appearance: Dirty Blond hair, one light grey eye and the other icy blue, and Fair skin

Personality: Thoughtful, Brave, Sneaky, Intellectual, and Firey tempered

Family: Drake Chetarin(Father), Leahia Chetarin(Mother), Blaze Chetarin (brother)
Friends: Blaze Flames, Frost Moons

History: She comes from a vary Rich family. She has always be good with fixing difrent types of tech.

Abilities: Vary good at detecting traps. Good climber.

Weakness's: Falls down to much. she always does what she's told even it's at her own demise.

Best weapon: Bow, Staff, or sharp rock.

Strategy: Sneaks up on people then hits them over the head, or shots them from afar.

Token: Icy blue Robin Feather.

Preferable Death: Cracked neck from falling or Being shot in the chest.

OUTFITS (optional)

Reaping: Her best friend -Frost Moons- was chosen so she volunteered to take her place.

Chariot: A silvery grey metallic grey chariot. With Gear wheels.

charliesunshine chapter 1 . 7/10/2013
that was really good, I kinda liked George, update again soon