on top of your eitger over use or misuse of the word mock your having kisuke teach ichigo something that by kisukes own admission in the manga and anime that only Zangetsu can teach ichigo

either you like the word mock or you dont know what it means because all anger seems to be mock anger

3 chapters in and its still tge same day...

I know it is totally irrelevant to the story and I am yet to start reading but... Is that 666 in the word count?!

No anime would be completed without a beach day!

when is the sequel can't wait to see how it plays out

Sucks loses the meaning

I'm not a big fan of harem pairings, but I can see that Ichigo is in a hell lot of trouble for the future with all those women who have quite the temper except Nel. And I actually don't understand why you thought it was a good idea to add a OC fraccion. Halibel Nel and Yoruichi was more than enough in my opinion. Other than that the plot, fight scenes, character dialogues were one of the best I've seen in Bleach fanfics. And I honestly expected a Epilogue or Sequel but oh well. A good read for Arrancar Ichigo fanfic, and Ichigo being too OP from the start was explained by his heritage, Hougyoku, and Zangetsu's dialogue so at the end I could accept the reasoning.

Well if he can't speak he can at least write another letter right?

This story lost its edge because of ichigo wanting to kidnap yoruichi cause that's a good idea and attack the soul society his friends, this got so stupid

Though I have qualms about the story, I can't deny that this story is good, the story took a better turn during chapter 40 above. Still, I haven't thought that the ending is underwhelming, like it's very rushed just to finish it. Still a good read if I ignored the teasing practically coerced actions in every dialogue.

So far, every characters seems spineless towards women. 2015 the year of cowardly mc's starts to be popular in every anime genre, so I can see the inspiration on this one. So far I skipped every conversation as to spare me the never learning, never growing 'a pair' attitude of multitudes of characters in every chapter. But story portrayal took an improvement at the start of chapter 27. Dialogues at this moment finally received a sprinkle of water so as to not appear dry and managed to get some of my curiosity.

All in all good story, spineless, coward male populace/bad, and Aizen's ambiguous borderline impossible plan is annoying to read. Without the author's notes one will not even know the direction the story is taking.

Too much internal dialogue, the story has good general concept but I find the execution to be poor. The conversation between characters is dry and romance is forced making the individuality of each characters or persona lost in the process. The running gag between men and women is overused and as much as Urahara's personality is involved, he always gets the last laugh even against Yoruichi who has the same playful personality. Ichigo may be a prude but he's not weak willed against women as portrayed in this story. I'm not here to say every character's personality but it's severely poorly depicted as if every male made in this story has a will of chocolate to be devoured by being glared at by women or threatened.

Regardless, I like the idea that made this fanfic. I shall continue reading in hopes of improvement in every characters personality, glass will of every male characters, portrayal of the story and the communication aspect of the story. So far I'm only chapter 20.

Ulquiorra you fool lmao, and we never saw them again

A really interesting story with nice plot and pairings. Thank you for sharing your story and keep up the great work.