I don't know if you'll ever read this, I heard you passed away. If so, that is a terrible loss. Your writing has meant so much to me for so long. I read your stories before getting married, and it's been 12 years of marriage now, and when we have little ones someday, we'll read your stories to them too. So whether you are alive or not, thank you. And if you have indeed passed on, you live on in these stories you poured your heart into. Thank you so much.

What an intriguing start! I'm loving this so far. Very different from anything else I have read which is refreshing. On to the next chapter!

Simply fabulous, what an excellent story you've crafted! The theme, the new characters, EVERYTHING, just delightful and so interesting I could hardly stop reading. I know a story is excellent when that happens, and also when I realize I don't want it to end. That's how i feel about this story!

A wonderful story. I have read many times. One of my favorites.

Thanks for sharing.

Absolutely incredible story 3

Well, this story has been on here for nearly 20 years. But I've only just found it as my first labrynth fanfiction. And it was beautiful. So wonderfully worded and so full of drama that had me on the edge of my seat. Exquisite!

Still awesome nearly 20 years after I first read it!

This is so so so good, the way you have delved into the backstory of Sarah is phenomenal. I can't stop reading! It all makes so much sense!

I don’t know how many times I’ve read this over the years, but it never fails to disappoint. Thank you so much for this wonderful work, it’s one of my all time favorites! You’ve left a wonderful legacy behind ️

This is easily in my top 5 fanfic stories now. I only saw Labyrinth for the first time recently and I really needed more. I’m sooooo glad your story was the one I found! I started reading before I went to bed and I actually read through the entire night until I finished the whole thing. It took me literally 8 hours and I’m typing this very sleep deprived, but I want to thank you for this story. It was compelling from the first chapter and your OCs were amazing additions. I know thousands of readers have said the same thing, but this story is absolutely beautiful and so well thought out! You stayed so true to the core material and the way you evolved it into something beyond that, is remarkable. Thanks again, I absolutely love this story!

Wonderful storyline. Would only hope that there is a way Sarah may live beyond her normal human life span as it would make it easier on her to produce all those children that Jareth wants to be surrounded by.

WOW!

A beautiful story, thank you. I am especially thankful that you decided Sarah's muppet friends were an illusion.

It is fitting that I read this again on the anniversary of Bowie's death. Thank you for this fantastic story.

I know you won't see this but such a great story deserves to still get reviews. It's firm favourite.

This story was great :) thank you!